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I WOULD COVER MYSELF IN GASOLINE
Contributed by
boredoms_burden
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Monday, 12th February 2007 @ 10:05:41 PM in AEST
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Im dreaming of that face again
Its bright its blue and its shimmerin
the lights so right they drag over and over till my eyes become weak
my bodys numb my head is tingling my legs feel weightless
my chest feels likes its floating and my eyes are amazed by every little detail
every little sound is so sweet to my ears all the things i was afraid of all my worries are gone and flushed away
the meaning has no meaning the world seems so absurd and for that one moment everything is perfect and so beautiful
i would cover myself in gasoline and light a match before i gave up the feeling i get when im with her
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Re: I WOULD COVER MYSELF IN GASOLINE
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by feralpen on
Tuesday, 13th February 2007 @ 07:46:19 AM AEST
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| I can relate to your poem... just hope that it never comes to your ultimate conclusion. An inspired write comes from an inspired feeling, I certainly think you have found inspiration. I enjoyed your poem and the wonderful feeling it gives. |
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Re: I WOULD COVER MYSELF IN GASOLINE
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 13th February 2007 @ 11:45:50 AM AEST
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a very intense write this is.. you can feel the powerful emotion for this person its well expressed
vampyress jenni |
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