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This Beautiful Love.
Contributed by
bleedthelove
on
Monday, 12th February 2007 @ 08:00:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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I love the way it feels
Ever since the day I fell...
Head over heels
So deep in love...
This beautiful love
I can feel it seeping
Seeping through my pores
I can feel it creeping
Creeping through the cores
Of my body, heart, mind and soul
I felt it swallow me whole
And take control
Of my essence
My utmost presence
Fearless on my breath
Its something I don't need to vocalize
You can see it in my eyes
Taste it on my skin
From the outside in
All that is me
All in the name of she
For she is...
This beautiful love.
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bleedthelove
... [
2007-02-12 20:00:33]
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Re: This Beautiful Love.
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by SaintzAndSinnerz on
Monday, 12th February 2007 @ 10:05:00 PM AEST
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| This poem gave me chills. Its so beautiful and your love just pours from the words. always such amazing words from you bleedthelove. |
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Re: This Beautiful Love.
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by yangdantien on
Monday, 12th February 2007 @ 10:17:17 PM AEST
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A true love poem so graceful on the ear and wondrous to match this time of year.
Bravo
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Re: This Beautiful Love.
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by PhantomVampyress on
Tuesday, 13th February 2007 @ 10:37:38 AM AEST
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wow this is an intense expressive piece.. I love the flow of this and the wording.. such a devoted loving write.. awesome job
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: This Beautiful Love.
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by lilblkcat on
Tuesday, 13th February 2007 @ 06:24:47 PM AEST
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| this was a great write. it really showed a lot of feeling in it. it even made me smile while i was reading it. |
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