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Beauty
Contributed by
Daniellle
on
Monday, 12th February 2007 @ 02:36:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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You dismissed my flaws
Ignored my incapabilities
Didn't want me for my looks
Loved me for my soul
You weren't like all the others
You only cared about the inside
And because of that factor
I felt beautiful on the outside
My heart grew warm with love
My sould burned with passion
I've never felt like this before
You gave me consciousness of myself
Wiped my tears and held me at night
Laughed with me, scared away my fright
Knew what I'd say before I said it
Knew what Ithought before it came to mind
We were two-in-one, a package, you'd say
But in someways, I'd disagree
You weren't part of my life
You were part of me.
Copyright ©
Daniellle
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2007-02-12 14:36:13]
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Re: Beauty
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by PhantomVampyress on
Monday, 12th February 2007 @ 02:57:04 PM AEST
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very well expressed.. I love the ending. its so true that when you are beautiful inside it shows on the outside.. well done
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Re: Beauty
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by trini on
Monday, 12th February 2007 @ 03:53:29 PM AEST
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AW!
this really touched me. you've made a really good point. one of my most favourite love poems.
thanks for sharing and keep up the great work
-Trini
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Re: Beauty
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by seafire on
Monday, 12th February 2007 @ 05:48:41 PM AEST
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i really liked this poem alot it isnt what you look like on the outside as much as what is on the inside how wonderful to be loved for you
good write
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Re: Beauty
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by Oceandreamer on
Tuesday, 13th February 2007 @ 03:50:54 PM AEST
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| Beautiful ending! |
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