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I Can Not Say Good-Bye
Contributed by
MickeyPigKnuckles
on
Monday, 12th February 2007 @ 10:14:28 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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" I Can Not Say Good-Bye "
I was hoping, I was dreaming
I am left here all alone
the angels came a calling
they took you to their home
You told me not to do it
you told me not to cry
it hurts so bad I miss you
I Can Not Say Good-Bye
I know that you have made it
up in heavens sky
I know that you can see me
with your watchful eye
You were the only one I cherished
and I love you too
I will keep our treasured memories
in my heart for you
Please be happy and at peace
up in heaven where you are
I get to see you every night
the brightest shining star
When my life here is over
I'm done and then I'm through
I will be right beside you
up in heaven next to you
I know that you are busy
preparing a place for me
soon we'll be together
through eternity!!!!!
Penned By James L. McHenry
Copyright © 2007 James L. McHenry
Copyright © 2007 By Mickey Pig Knuckles
Copyright © 2007 Mickey Pig Knuckles (All rights reserved)
Copyright © 2007 HeartFelt TM
Quote: Life Is Poetry In Motion, Great Poets Reflect Emotion
The Best And Most Beautiful Thing In The World Can’t Be Seen Or Touched
It Must Be Felt With Your Heart
Copyright ©
MickeyPigKnuckles
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2007-02-12 10:14:28]
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Re: I Can Not Say Good-Bye
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by PhantomVampyress on
Monday, 12th February 2007 @ 10:24:11 AM AEST
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this is such a heart felt beautiful write.. its sad but yet hopeful that you will meet again in heaven.. beautiful job
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Re: I Can Not Say Good-Bye
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by soulsearching43 on
Monday, 12th February 2007 @ 11:11:57 AM AEST
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wow what a poem it truely moved me
great work |
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by UrMyInspiration on
Monday, 12th February 2007 @ 11:43:06 AM AEST
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| This is full of emotion. Very touching. Thank you for sharing such beautiful words. |
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by Rhei76 on
Monday, 12th February 2007 @ 11:48:42 AM AEST
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truely a heart felt piece for any who lost the one they loved. I to gaze upon the stars to witness mine watching over me.
Great write it helps me reflect. |
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Re: I Can Not Say Good-Bye
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by Oceandreamer on
Monday, 12th February 2007 @ 11:59:09 AM AEST
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| Wow....I love this poem!I can relate to your poetry and your way of writing.A deep and touching write.Thanks for sharing. |
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Re: I Can Not Say Good-Bye
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Monday, 12th February 2007 @ 07:20:59 PM AEST
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Oh my this is such a moving and heart touching write. It brought tears to my eyes. I remember when my best friend passed away last year, it was so hard to say goodbye & to let go.
Death is but a doorway to eternal life~
I know he will be waiting to greet me at the door.
A moving, heartfelt and excellently penned write that leaves the reader wiping tears from their eyes.
Thank you so much for sharing this with us.
big warm hugs,
sue m |
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Re: I Can Not Say Good-Bye
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by purplestary on
Tuesday, 13th February 2007 @ 05:02:17 AM AEST
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| sad and beautiful. amazing write. |
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Re: I Can Not Say Good-Bye
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Tuesday, 13th February 2007 @ 07:07:41 AM AEST
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Truely beautiful and heartfelt. This was a very well written piece.
Take care
Christina-xo |
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Re: I Can Not Say Good-Bye
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by GingerB on
Tuesday, 13th February 2007 @ 04:14:20 PM AEST
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Touching and so beautifully written. Loved it. Thank you for sharing your heart with us
Hugs
Ginny |
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Re: I Can Not Say Good-Bye
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by Oceandreamer on
Wednesday, 14th February 2007 @ 01:52:30 PM AEST
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| Awesome write!Deep and toughing words.Thanks for sharing. Oceandreamer |
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