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I Would Have Died A Million Deaths
Contributed by
MickeyPigKnuckles
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Sunday, 11th February 2007 @ 10:10:17 AM in AEST
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" I Would Have Died A Million Deaths "
I had this real strange feeling
looked outside my window
the night time fills the air
I felt a strange sensation
looked up to the sky
your face was way up there
I had to quickly turn away
because it hurts me so
the love that we once shared
we had to let it go
I laid upon my bed
as tears rolled down my face
I closed my eyes and pictured
our past a beautiful place
Most men may dream of money
while others dream of fame
you dreamt of playing me
in your evil lustful game
Some men search for treasures
found and then they lost
some men want the power
no matter what the cost
A few men seek their true love
to make their dreams come true
I Would Have Died A Million Deaths
to spend my life with you!!!!!
Penned By James L. McHenry
Copyright © 2007 James L. McHenry
Copyright © 2007 By Mickey Pig Knuckles
Copyright © 2007 Mickey Pig Knuckles (All rights reserved)
Copyright © 2007 HeartFelt TM
Quote: Life Is Poetry In Motion, Great Poets Reflect Emotion
The Best And Most Beautiful Thing In The World Can’t Be Seen Or Touched
It Must Be Felt With Your Heart
Copyright ©
MickeyPigKnuckles
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2007-02-11 10:10:17]
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Re: I Would Have Died A Million Deaths
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by boredoms_burden on
Sunday, 11th February 2007 @ 10:19:37 AM AEST
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| exellent right, i truly enjoyed it |
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Re: I Would Have Died A Million Deaths
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by Malcolmsdreamgirl on
Sunday, 11th February 2007 @ 01:24:31 PM AEST
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Mickeypigknuckles ...... beautiful words and feeling ..... but I feel you had a lucky escape or at least the person in this poem did ......
I like your style and how your poems make me feel whilst reading them ........
Dee xx |
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Monday, 12th February 2007 @ 03:14:00 AM AEST
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Wow, the more I read of your poetry the more I'm becoming hooked. You possess a true gift of writing and you pen such beautiful masterpieces that come straight from the heart. You reach out to your readers and leave them captivated from start to finish. I like that in a writer. A mighty fine job~ I will be sure to visit your pages more often.
Thanks for sharing your wonderful poetry with us~
*warm poetic hugs n smiles*
sue m |
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by PhantomVampyress on
Monday, 12th February 2007 @ 10:54:46 AM AEST
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beautifully written.. such a heartfelt devoted piece yet full of some pain in there.. beautifully done..
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: I Would Have Died A Million Deaths
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by europeanprincess on
Monday, 12th February 2007 @ 07:40:10 PM AEST
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| words are not expressed for waht i feel. thank you for sharing this. i loved it. |
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Re: I Would Have Died A Million Deaths
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by Oceandreamer on
Wednesday, 14th February 2007 @ 12:50:01 PM AEST
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| Wow...I don't have words to describe the beauty of this poem. |
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by a_bit_naieve on
Saturday, 17th February 2007 @ 01:10:16 AM AEST
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This peom conveys a lot of emotion. Just from reading it, I know exactly how the man in the poem (be it you, or somebody else) was feeling. It is written very beautifully, and is well understood.
-Devyn |
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