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NIGHT JOURNEY
Contributed by
Varro
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Sunday, 23rd February 2003 @ 08:40:00 PM in AEST
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At close of day, a languid spirit rests,
But restless mind needs tempest beat;
To walk the depths of the city night.
Up and out, down blocks of stone
To find where other strolling hearts abound,
And fill the night with playfulness.
Thus, drooping heart, now uplifted;
Intent on special escapades.
So into the night, most dev'lish fun
To nourish needful wants unfold.
No temp'rate joys on even tide,
That rarely ebb and flow;
The city speaks to countless souls
And beckons all to neon lights.
In summer's heat or winter's cold,
The taunts of city's boist'rous haunts
Lure cloister'd lives to alleys' back,
With ardour shows the way.
Journey out tonight and tread the
Broadest street to find a kindred soul.
Laugh amidst with frolic, and mirth to
Fill the night with boundless fun!
Copyright ©
Varro
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2003-02-23 20:40:00]
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Re: NIGHT JOURNEY
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by merge on
Sunday, 23rd February 2003 @ 08:50:11 PM AEST
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| Very vivid! Nice use of diction and beat. Fills me with a rush. |
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Re: NIGHT JOURNEY
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 23rd February 2003 @ 10:09:50 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC!!!! I love your style... this is a well written poem.. Hope to see more...
Jenni |
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Re: NIGHT JOURNEY
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by karoody on
Monday, 24th February 2003 @ 01:20:53 AM AEST
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| yes, welcome. you have a refreshing style. |
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Re: NIGHT JOURNEY
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by venkat on
Monday, 24th February 2003 @ 03:10:16 AM AEST
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| Talented write. and it is like a good painting of a city scape with night lights. venkat |
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Re: NIGHT JOURNEY
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by Varro on
Monday, 24th February 2003 @ 03:10:50 PM AEST
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| Thank you merge for your kind words. Glad it stirred an emotion in you..I have others I will post soon. |
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Re: NIGHT JOURNEY
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by Varro on
Monday, 24th February 2003 @ 03:12:50 PM AEST
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| Thank you Jenni...I mix my style to keep my poems fresh..I have three others I will post today (Monday) Hope you like them. It makes me feel very good to know people are stirred by my poetry. |
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Re: NIGHT JOURNEY
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by Varro on
Monday, 24th February 2003 @ 04:08:54 PM AEST
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| Thank you karoody. I hope to post a lot more poems in the future. |
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Re: NIGHT JOURNEY
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by Varro on
Monday, 24th February 2003 @ 04:12:08 PM AEST
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| Thanks venkat. I think it is very important to have vivid imagry in poetry. It is essential because poetry is so emotional. I have a poem I will post soon about a murder in a back alley. I think I captured the stark picture of a sinister, rainy night under the el! I love film noir and enjoy detective yarns. |
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