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The Love Nobody Knows
Contributed by
KWAME-KAZI
on
Sunday, 11th February 2007 @ 08:39:02 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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We lived our dreams out loud
We floated on many clouds
Somehow I didn't pay close attention
Nor did my love give yours honorable mention
I rejected all the formalities
Thought I could win with originality
Brought down by reality
As you walked away casually
I stand in the wind as it blows
Thinking about the love that nobody knows
Nobody knows my deepest expressions
They don't even know I'm learning a lesson
They make passes that I don't even see
No one knows I'm dying to a degree
Living in a past relationship each day
How could one ever find his way?
I think of all of the things that I could've done better
I even sat down and wrote her a letter
I sealed it with a kiss and sent her a rose
It was returned as a love that nobody knows.
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KWAME-KAZI
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2007-02-11 08:39:02]
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Re: The Love Nobody Knows
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by FRANCO on
Sunday, 11th February 2007 @ 08:46:37 AM AEST
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Wonderful; Love is a feeling that every one think they know but in reality nobody knows.
beautiful words to match the poem and it's content.
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Re: The Love Nobody Knows
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by MickeyPigKnuckles on
Sunday, 11th February 2007 @ 10:27:28 AM AEST
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KWAME-KAZI, This is beautifully orchestrated by a very talented poet. Such an emotional injection for your readers to feel and enjoy as they read your living words of art that paint such a vivid image of beauty within their minds eye. Thank you for sharing such a wonderful poem and for giving us all a little of yourself.
Mickey Pig Knuckles
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Re: The Love Nobody Knows
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by yangdantien on
Monday, 12th February 2007 @ 11:47:10 PM AEST
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This was tight and a good read and oh so true this time of year, for sadly, way too many.
Well Done
Peace
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