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you lie
Contributed by
mangos
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Saturday, 10th February 2007 @ 05:47:18 PM in AEST
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Try and understand
I was compelled
I had no choice
Beyond my control
Were the things I could not change
Was the very thing
That made you run away
Show me compassion
Sympathy in all the right places
Some forgiveness
A change of heart
A second chance
To try again
To fail if we must
How are you doing
Its been such a long time
It only gets lonelier
With each passing day
As you fade
And fade
Until there is no one there
Do you miss me
I miss you
Did you ever love me
Like you said you did
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Copyright ©
mangos
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2007-02-10 17:47:18]
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Re: you lie
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by FRANCO on
Saturday, 10th February 2007 @ 08:54:38 PM AEST
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The poet has brought out the whisper of a heart's guilt betrayal and regret. Very good indeed.
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Re: you lie
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 11th February 2007 @ 08:28:54 PM AEST
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M~ this is incredibly sad .. such longing ..
I think you have captured a sentiment that
many could and do relate to ..
beautifully painful and painfully beautiful ~
~Breezy |
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Re: you lie
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by hauntedscorp on
Friday, 16th March 2007 @ 02:58:14 PM AEST
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Sometimes the only real lie is what we try and feed ourselves... Nothing is achieved through lying, and if a moment of honesty closes a door, then that door was never truly open to begin with. At least being honest with yourself and others doesn't leave you wondering "What if...?" for the rest of your days... That's my opinion anyway. I hope you find your answers once you seek them out.
~Scorp. |
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