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The one I love
Contributed by
The-solo-subject
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Saturday, 22nd February 2003 @ 05:40:00 PM in AEST
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The one that holds my heart is at a distance ,
far away she sleeps in bed,the bed that we have made, in the home we call our own,.
I dream of her with flowing hair and loving eyes giving me that smile that is only mine,
the one she saves for me ,
but sadness fills my heart for I know that dream will end and ill wake far away from my wife from my heart from the one I love.
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Re: The one I love
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 22nd February 2003 @ 06:03:41 PM AEST
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Awww Mr Solo...this is so sad..but so sweet.... I can not begin to imagine the loneliness you guys must go thru.. My thoughts are with you all..
Jenni |
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Re: The one I love
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by karoody on
Saturday, 22nd February 2003 @ 11:32:43 PM AEST
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| keep her in your heart and dreams, and if she does same, there is no real boundary between you. hope that the distance does not remain, however. |
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Re: The one I love
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by olasunkanmi on
Sunday, 23rd February 2003 @ 02:03:42 PM AEST
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| Take heart, though her face may be absent but love not her face but her heat then she will always be by ur side always.Take care |
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Re: The one I love
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by WordPoet on
Sunday, 23rd February 2003 @ 02:43:02 PM AEST
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Touching hearts from a distance through the passionate words of your soul.
Nice write. |
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Re: The one I love
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by PhantomsLDY on
Sunday, 23rd February 2003 @ 04:44:59 PM AEST
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| this is so sweet and if she loves you as much you love her it will be fine. A yaer goes by faster than you think. |
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