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To See Tomorrow

Contributed by PlatinumP on Saturday, 10th February 2007 @ 10:00:31 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

I recently found out my grandmother has cancer and they say it cant be cured...so i dealt with it the only way i know how...

I never imagined that someday you wouldn't be here
I always knew it would come, but not a time so near
You loved me with all your heart, this I never forgot
In my life you've always been, cared when most did not
I heard something today, it broke me down inside
Even sitting here writing now I can't help but cry
I try to hold them back, there’s just so many tears
One for each memory of you cherished through the years
I took it for granted, even though I should have never
That one day, eventually this bond would be severed
I already can't think what it's going to be like that day
When I hear the news that God's taken you away
So I sit here dear lord, writing down my sorrows
Please, oh please, let my grandmother see tomorrow

Copyright Â© PlatinumP ... [ 2007-02-10 10:00:31]
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Re: To See Tomorrow (User Rating: 1 )
by MickeyPigKnuckles on Saturday, 10th February 2007 @ 10:27:22 AM AEST
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PlatinumP, the content of message is sad and so heartfelt but the composure was penned so beautifully and with such a strong emotion. Thank you for sharing your gift and love of poetry with all of us and for giving us more of you. Wonderful poem.

Mickey Pig Knuckles

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