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A Strange Desire
Contributed by
unknown_utopia
on
Saturday, 10th February 2007 @ 03:37:45 AM in AEST
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I giggle just a little
fall in love when you wiggle
I'm in the twilight of the outer limits
and I'm stuck in the middle
of something very strange...
I'm a clown in confusion
always choosin
to do the things that I shouldn't be doing
things like
stop and pause just because
sometimes I feel the need
to not be ignored.
I like to be alone
and unknown
I dig the way I sway
when nobody else is around
but I wanna hug and kiss
and drift in bliss
emotionally I need to go up
although I know I'll fall down.
Stuck in the middle
with a strange desire.
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2007-02-10 03:37:45]
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Re: A Strange Desire
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by lostrelic on
Saturday, 10th February 2007 @ 03:40:22 AM AEST
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Re: A Strange Desire
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by MickeyPigKnuckles on
Saturday, 10th February 2007 @ 10:15:13 AM AEST
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unknown_utopia, another wonderful creation by a very talented poet. I really like the journey you have taken this reader on as being stuck in the middle with a strange desire is not a bad thing by any means. Have I told you that I really dig your writing style and if not I am letting you know this now. Awesome work. Reading your words of art is such a pleasure and now I have me yet another poetic treasure.
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Re: A Strange Desire
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 21st February 2007 @ 05:55:38 AM AEST
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Oh me sweetie,
I just can't see anyone ignoring you, what with your handsome torso and your magic words.
Awesome writing.
Big huggs, smiles,
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