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Out At Sea
Contributed by
broken_not_beautiful
on
Friday, 9th February 2007 @ 11:29:58 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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these feelings are
indescribeable
these thoughts are
undenyable
the things you say
are so close to perfection
it makes me miss you more
through our long distance connection
my brain is so
unrelyable
but that moment was
unforgetable
not even alone
people all around
but when your lips met mine
a heart beat was the only sound
and after that
with your hand in mine
i started to pretend
i would be just fine
the realest truth
the truth thats most whole:
your love is my everything
my life and my soul
so when your far away
its like im drifting off to sea
theres nothing left to keep me sane
and theres nothing here for me
so while im drifting further out
im dreaming of your face
close my eyes and there you are
then your gone without a trace
and when you finaly come back home
to the place you have longged for
thats the day i make my way
back onto the shore
cause im waiting for you
as im out here at sea
and until you come home
you know where ill be
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broken_not_beautiful
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2007-02-09 23:29:58] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Out At Sea
(User Rating: 1 ) by MickeyPigKnuckles on
Saturday, 10th February 2007 @ 12:38:13 AM AEST (User
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broken_not_beautiful, This was composed so beautifully and with such a sincere emotional touch of warmness. Thank You for sharing both your love of poetic literature and yourself with all of us. Beautiful poem. After reading this poem I sure hope you never think or decide to place your poetic pen down because you would surly be missed causing your reading fans to frown. Thank You once again.
Mickey Pig Knuckles
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