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Bad Excuse
Contributed by
Jyssvw22
on
Friday, 9th February 2007 @ 04:32:18 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Beginners luck
The magic touch
Women and such
Play a part
In love
From the gut
Words of lust
Heart of gold
Rare trust
Love runs
Away from us
Super strength
Endowed length
Elbows bend
In flexible trends
From up to down
From start to end
_________
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Copyright ©
Jyssvw22
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2007-02-09 16:32:18]
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Re: Bad Excuse
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 9th February 2007 @ 05:15:11 PM AEST
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Oh my jyss .. this seems almost cryptic (on accounta the title)
(and the impression I got from this, might just be a little
too telling of my own psyche ...)
so .. let me just say (on that note), that I found this
very interesting and entirely absorbing !
The second stanza gives me enormous pause ..
excellent post
~Breezy |
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Re: Bad Excuse
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by Man_On_High on
Friday, 16th February 2007 @ 12:26:12 AM AEST
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I'm only sorry that I'm not logged in more often.. to read you, as you spill at length,
your many shortcomings.. lol (I'm kidding my friend)
INTERPRETATION IS RELEVANT ONLY, TO THE READER
..pleased, if you'd disregard that bit... and know that I found you there, on the OTHER end of the proverbial scale.. lol
(given your magnificent ego)
..a wonderful act of narration jyss,
you never disappoint~
Your greatest fan.. bar none..
B |
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Re: Bad Excuse
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by hauntedscorp on
Friday, 16th March 2007 @ 02:29:44 PM AEST
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I'm always mildly amused at your almost persistent need to run away from your subject at hand by the last stanza ( or sometimes, depending on just how honest you're being, by mid poem ;) ) I wonder if anyone else has noticed that, or if you even have...? It's like you want to keep your thoughts shielded, even from yourself... I suppose that's part of your charm, and what keeps me coming back to your account pages :)
~Scorp. |
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