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stuck
Contributed by
LadyDama
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Saturday, 22nd February 2003 @ 03:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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my mind lacerates into a foggy mess
these thoughts of sadness invading my soul
a light is there, but out of reach
i try to grasp a foothold of the bloody hill
but am pushed to my knees again
i peer up at your face
a visage of wonderment and light
you smile at me as if to say
"what could possibly be wrong, little one"
a band of gold sits on my finger
promises of yesterday bind my mind
i am stuck in a troubled abyss
of my own head
a beautiful child with ringlets of gold
loves without question
as we should too
i am so tired.............................
october 29, 2002
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LadyDama
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Re: stuck
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by roisin on
Saturday, 22nd February 2003 @ 04:25:34 PM AEST
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in hopes that you have now found what had been previously out of reach...I found this to be an interesting, thought-provoking write..
ta
rosie |
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Re: stuck
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by Valerie_Pearson on
Saturday, 22nd February 2003 @ 08:47:22 PM AEST
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| beautiful write, always remember to live as a child, have fun, each day is new, and love, love, love, thanks for sharing this one |
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Re: stuck
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by karoody on
Saturday, 22nd February 2003 @ 11:56:03 PM AEST
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| unconditional love is one of the greatest things. in the darkest moments, try to find a way to locate peace within yourself. hopefully you reach that light. often feels like chasing the white rabbit, huh? |
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Re: stuck
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by LOWMAN613 on
Sunday, 23rd February 2003 @ 10:00:23 AM AEST
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| Michele, we often miss reaching that light but soon it will be right in front of you! Love is so strong! Christina |
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Re: stuck
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by WordPoet on
Sunday, 23rd February 2003 @ 03:02:10 PM AEST
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A brief and undisclosed glimpse into a mind filled with uncertainty, yet with the knowledge that you are surrounded by those things in life that should truly matter.
Entrancing and well written. |
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Re: stuck
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by venkat on
Monday, 24th February 2003 @ 02:15:50 AM AEST
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| The real self remains as a witness to the experiences of your mind which is tired of worldly joys and sorrows. The real self lies behind the curtain of the sub concious of your ego, has assumed the shape of a beautiful child with golden ringlets and you caught its glimpse. Thatsall what I found in this poem. venkat |
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Re: stuck
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by Varro on
Monday, 24th February 2003 @ 04:52:15 PM AEST
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| Lady: Yes, we are all in a similar struggle, trying to sort out our lives and make sense out of everything. It is a constant struggle like you say, never give up..gain the 'foothold.' Very nice write! |
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