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no title yet...sorry
Contributed by
crazy
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Friday, 9th February 2007 @ 08:33:17 AM in AEST
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oops
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tears run down the girls face
her hand shakes as she grabs the blade]
cut 1 cut 2 cut 3
3 cuts for 3 mistakes
hide behind the pretty face
without reason or cause
she draws her strength
from her lost memories
of times once had
on the floor she is numb
theropy once a week
for all the time
she made herself bleed
group sessions of reasons why
months go by and then....
she trys to kill herself
addmitted to a mental hospital
a battle waging inside
to live or to die
a week of her life changed forever
by a few nice people
living with regrets
of lost time
all the time when i worried
i left the outside
to hide within
theorpy and counseling
medicine and doctors
a new day each with it's own stuggles
striving to find a healthier way to live
to deal with stress an alternative to cutting
suicide lost in yesterday's memory
living, breathing, thinking to a healthier way of living
Copyright ©
crazy
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2007-02-09 08:33:17]
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Re: no title yet...sorry
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by Channing on
Friday, 9th February 2007 @ 09:46:32 AM AEST
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Sounds very melancholy at first, but then develops into an optimistic message. Gret write!
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Re: no title yet...sorry
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by PhantomVampyress on
Friday, 9th February 2007 @ 01:44:32 PM AEST
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very well written out.. i like this piece alot.. it starts off sad and then gives hope at the end.. very well done
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Re: no title yet...sorry
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by Saloni on
Tuesday, 13th February 2007 @ 05:55:38 PM AEST
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| billiant poem! |
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Re: no title yet...sorry
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by Vampirequeen on
Saturday, 17th February 2007 @ 10:50:28 PM AEST
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| i agree with jenni i like this poem. |
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