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Ain't No Telling
Contributed by
unknown_utopia
on
Friday, 9th February 2007 @ 02:46:05 AM in AEST
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In a daze
I often blaze
to a unknown place
where there is no trace
of sorrow,
I think of things
that mean nothing
I let out silent screams
and imagine movies
where I am thee hero.
I laugh about
the things I doubt
as sensations spin me "round,
oh so sweetly
melting and flowing
I slowly go down.
All the firewalls are broken
my modem is smoking
I laugh I giggle
cause there is no need
for sorrow,
InnerVisons are flowing
I transform
oh I'm exploding
you better get me now
ain't no telling
where I will be tomorrow.
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unknown_utopia
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2007-02-09 02:46:05]
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Re: Ain't No Telling
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by lost_chadow on
Friday, 9th February 2007 @ 07:33:52 AM AEST
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| good and fun and random. I miss poems like these. Keep it up, mate. |
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Re: Ain't No Telling
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by Bleedthelove on
Friday, 9th February 2007 @ 01:09:23 PM AEST
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| "Oh I'm exploding you better get me now, ain't no telling where I will be tomorrow". Awesome words. They ring out so true in me. Excellent write. |
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Re: Ain't No Telling
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by MickeyPigKnuckles on
Saturday, 10th February 2007 @ 12:19:17 AM AEST
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unknown_utopia, Now this is very creative writing in excellent poetic form. I really enjoyed your style and now must thank you for sharing a little of your creative personality with us all and for giving us such a wonderful poem to savor. I will be waiting for you to reach for and pick up your poetic pen, so once again I can feel myself bearing a warm grin. Thank You.
Mickey Pig Knuckles
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Re: Ain't No Telling
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by emystar on
Wednesday, 21st February 2007 @ 06:06:35 AM AEST
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I certainly heard that.
Great work.
Big huggs,
emy |
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Re: Ain't No Telling
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by JamesStockdale on
Tuesday, 28th July 2020 @ 03:12:29 AM AEST
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| Off the cuff........ the real deal. |
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