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From a different view

Contributed by nirvana12 on Friday, 9th February 2007 @ 01:25:01 AM in AEST
Topic: Grief

Well we have been good friends and I thought that it would stay that way. Now I see you're better, at least this is what you say.

From others I expect this but not from you. I guess this goes to show you nothing is absolute.

I miss how you were when you did not judge us. Now you're so mature that we are not even allowed to cuss.

The house is all yours and you make up all the rules. Even though I pay half I get no say in what to do.

I moved out to get away from my family. Now you're more like my mom than I ever wished she would be.

Sometimes I feel like you just don't give a ****. We've been friends our whole life, and now you decide **** it?

I wish that we could just sit down like friends and talk, but when I suggest this you turn around and out the door you walk.

Well we have been good friends and I thought that it would stay that way. Now I see I'm better at least that's what the people say.

Copyright © nirvana12 ... [ 2007-02-09 01:25:01]
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Re: From a different view (User Rating: 1 )
by yangdantien on Friday, 9th February 2007 @ 02:07:47 PM AEST
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I would only add on this site vulgarity is not accepted so try being creative for example in your line:
"...Sometimes I feel like you just don't give a ***..."
lets have fun and try 'rats rectum' or guano, or diaper droppings...its a chance to really create. I also use frig or flying fig, instead of the second edited expletive. Keep writing and posting.

Good Job

Peace
Yang

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