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Contributed by
Nazmythian
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Thursday, 8th February 2007 @ 11:35:33 PM in AEST
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Consider for a moment
What it’s taken to get here
What roads I must have traveled
Which directions seemed unclear
Forgive my weathered body
With these spider webs of years
Holes I hold within my soul
All these scratches, scars and tears
I know some parts are missing
Much of me could be replaced
Please, before you walk away
Your impressions might be based
Much more on what I could be
Than as I appear right now
My name is appropriate
Yes, to this … I will avow
I am ...
( for the jalopy in my drive way )
~ Nazmythian ~
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Re: Special
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by MisfitMe on
Friday, 9th February 2007 @ 12:18:59 AM AEST
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Precious...I once felt this way about a Ford Falcon*wink*
BigLoveMuchPeace,
~MisfitMe
& a Rambler & a ... |
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Re: Special
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by PhantomVampyress on
Friday, 9th February 2007 @ 10:55:46 AM AEST
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wow great imagery.. this is an awesome write.. very expressive.. great job
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: Special
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by shelby on
Friday, 9th February 2007 @ 01:43:03 PM AEST
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Nazzy,
this had me for a moment again then I got to the end and smiled. Yes the jalopy in the drive is special, nothing better than I would say:) Incredible write.
~Michelle~ |
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Re: Special
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by Spike on
Friday, 9th February 2007 @ 06:01:26 PM AEST
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Naz, poetry for cars and people, I think . What a great read. I've had my versions of this in cars and motorbikes.
Forgive my weathered body
With these spider webs of years
a terrific description.
S
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Re: Special
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 9th February 2007 @ 08:21:38 PM AEST
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omigosh .. scotty .. this is UNREAL!!!
truly .. a work of beautiful and undeniable art.
(your car .. what a treasure!! )
that you could pen, in such a beautiful and unique way
all that you aspire in your means of transport .. is
quite admirable .. and beautiful, hun.
I love this!!!!
*hugs you tons*
~Breezy |
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Re: Special
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 12th February 2007 @ 09:32:34 PM AEST
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OK I'll be the one to say it......I thought you were writing about you!!!
hehe, ok may be you were.... ;) |
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Re: Special
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by Willofree on
Monday, 5th March 2007 @ 11:06:34 AM AEST
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Naz,
.As I read this poem, the following phrase entered my mind....I never promissed you a smooth journey, only a safe landing....
Others expectations may not be met, but the beat of our own drummer is the goal that should be set.
As usual, Nazzy, a thought provoking write....
Will/Terry
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Re: Special
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by needledancing on
Monday, 12th March 2007 @ 09:54:07 PM AEST
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Bare with me on this one...a song I learned at camp one year.
My old favourite is a right good friend,
All you gotta give her is a twist and a bend.
She needs new tires, front and rear.
The horn won't speak to the steering gear,
She's a little lopsided and her lamps don't light.
But outside of that My Favourites all right.
Honk diddle dee Honk Honk BEEP. Beep
I loved that as much as I enjoyed your car poem. |
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