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The Four Horsemen
Contributed by
Deathbringer
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Thursday, 8th February 2007 @ 08:45:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
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The Four Horsemen
Black feathered Horsemen, come screaming down to Earth
Like twisted horrors of unbearable nightmares
From desolated shattered souls come forth;
Their eyes burning black celebrating lifelessness
War, the name given to the first to come,
Many bones shattered, rivers of blood shed,
In the name of allmighthyness this was done
And men lost their souls in the face of dread.
The second Horseman, Famen he was called,
He who forever hungers withins us all,
The one who turns the souls into solid cold,
Souls of the brave who've fallen and shall fall.
The third horseman, with poison in his heart,
Pestilence he named himself, true to his name he was
And mastered means of torture, to him it was art.
He destroyed those men's poor, sadend, souls.
Death has reared it's throne on many blooded bones.
The fourth an final horseman, who bathed in blood soaked hate
Had come to claim all souls, and sadden many homes,
It came with hate in eyes, and its darken reign create.
It is a time of fears, a time of hate
Flee little men, but it is only fate.
OK...there definatly are some mispellings so point them out please.
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Re: The Four Horsemen
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by trackiller2006 on
Thursday, 8th February 2007 @ 09:42:22 PM AEST
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Absolutly Beautiful! Hands down the best I've read in a LONG time! You have a gift for the Dark Arts, never hide that.
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Re: The Four Horsemen
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by lostrelic on
Thursday, 8th February 2007 @ 10:24:24 PM AEST
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a great peom of fate and image nice write
like the flee little men part |
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Re: The Four Horsemen
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by Fionndruinne on
Friday, 9th February 2007 @ 12:17:28 AM AEST
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Misspellings: desolated (desolate), allmighthyness (almightiness), famen (famine), sadend (saddened), it's (its, line 17), an (and), darken (darkened[?]), and...
definatly (definitely). Heheh.
Not too bad, though. It's a bit wordy, but most of the word choices are pretty good. Nice effort. On behalf of the four horsemen, thanks.
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