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Looking Into the Stars
Contributed by
Linds
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Thursday, 8th February 2007 @ 07:34:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Looking into the stars I see your face
I know you want me, but I feel I’m just too late
I look into the stars and ponder
Look farther and farther yonder
I wonder how you could do this to me
But yet again
Why would I do this to thee?
Looking into the stars I see your face
Longing for me to draw nearer
But along with another glance
Comes an instant and chilling fear
It kills to know you’re there
And that I’m just somewhere
Hiding from all that’s true
Looking into the stars I see your face
But this time, I’m too weak to pace
I can’t even look anymore
I can’t escape your presence
Let me come back Holy Essence
Copyright ©
Linds
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2007-02-08 19:34:40]
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Re: Looking Into the Stars
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by MickeyPigKnuckles on
Friday, 9th February 2007 @ 10:25:11 AM AEST
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Interesting write and very enjoyable. Good job.
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Re: Looking Into the Stars
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by PhantomVampyress on
Friday, 9th February 2007 @ 10:58:26 AM AEST
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wow very great imagery and powerful expression here.. its sad when you wish someone was with you but they aren't. perhaps its time to find a new person.. i think you will.. this is a beauitful expression
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Re: Looking Into the Stars
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 9th February 2007 @ 04:53:45 PM AEST
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A very well expressed & detailed write. I liked the way you presented this and how it came across to your reader. You did a fine job with this. Well done.
warm hugs,
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Re: Looking Into the Stars
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by Crow on
Friday, 9th February 2007 @ 05:00:33 PM AEST
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Hi linds,
first, thank you for reading me.
a heartfelt write, sounds like your pulled two ways in this, needing" and letting go. excellent write. Crow
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Re: Looking Into the Stars
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 9th February 2007 @ 05:46:34 PM AEST
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Wow .. at first read, I thought perhaps you might have been
talking about a person .. and then on some other level,
"love itself" .. but having noticed it falls under self-struggle,
I pause now to give it more thought.
I agree with crow .. it definitely seems like a struggle of good and evil
within. You have penned it so eloquently and with much graciousness.
I hope you find the peace you seek ..
*smiles*
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