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My Sleepy Sadness
Contributed by
Channing
on
Thursday, 8th February 2007 @ 05:57:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Sleepy, I feel so sleepy
My eyes are so heavy yet stare
At the world, which has
Suddenly grown to be so ugly,
Everything has become a whirlwind
Of what appears to be hopelessness
And everyone is denying it,
It makes me sick that they deny
Instead of accepting all for what it is,
They just laugh and joke
While I sit here and choke
For a part of me won’t let it in,
It won’t let in their happiness
Nor their denial
And I can’t prohibit my sickness,
A part of me refuses, the other
Wants to take in the denial and happiness
It wishes and longs for it,
Part of me wishes that fire
Did not burn, that people
Weren’t so cruel, that my world
Wasn’t folding in on itself,
But that’s just the way it is
And it makes me feel so sad,
And so very sleepy
For I just want to be happy
Like everyone who denies
What is going on all around,
But that sick twisted part of me
Won’t let it go,
Thus I feel so sad and so sleepy
For I’m tired of fighting,
Sleepy, oh so sleepy…
-Channing-
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Channing
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2007-02-08 17:57:39]
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Re: My Sleepy Sadness
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by Linds on
Thursday, 8th February 2007 @ 06:55:50 PM AEST
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this is beautiful. it sounds just like my life right about now. i love it, its amazing. Very good expression.
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Re: My Sleepy Sadness
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by SaintzAndSinnerz on
Thursday, 8th February 2007 @ 08:33:41 PM AEST
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| Powerful write. great job on this |
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Re: My Sleepy Sadness
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by MickeyPigKnuckles on
Friday, 9th February 2007 @ 09:20:19 AM AEST
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I like it. good job.
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