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Lost Hope
Contributed by
linds
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Thursday, 8th February 2007 @ 05:27:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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All hope is lost today and forever
I can't convey how shocking this is, ever
Like a plane falling from the sky
That’s how this is in my mind
Other people experience these times
But I never contemplated they would be mine
My emotions are flying
Around and around
“Oh please be okay, Granddad,
Be safe and sound”
Here I lay on the ground
Hoping all worries could be banished
But that hope is gone, and worries are lavish
Soon when I fall asleep
The waterfall will unfreeze
And the stream will pour down
With such a graceful ease
There’s no stopping it at this instant
All that’s been done is so consistent
I just want something to collapse
Anything to give in
To make my life a little complicated less
And help me to be at an enduring rest
Copyright ©
linds
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2007-02-08 17:27:08]
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Re: Lost Hope
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by Rhei76 on
Thursday, 8th February 2007 @ 08:06:52 PM AEST
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beautiful words and i understand how it feels.
best of prayers and stay strong. |
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Re: Lost Hope
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by SaintzAndSinnerz on
Thursday, 8th February 2007 @ 08:38:03 PM AEST
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| Aww. i hope your granddad is okay. God bless. |
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Re: Lost Hope
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by PhantomVampyress on
Friday, 9th February 2007 @ 11:02:12 AM AEST
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a very good penned out write.. sorry to hear about your grandfather I hope he gets better quickly..
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: Lost Hope
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by smilin_eyes on
Friday, 9th February 2007 @ 06:59:05 PM AEST
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i know how u feel...just dont give up...just always remember good things never stay long...
hoping the best for u...
~smilin_eyes~
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