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SMILE
Contributed by
trialnerror
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Thursday, 8th February 2007 @ 11:00:03 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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A drift of thoughts has come to me
A river over flooded my mind
Just because I want you to be,
The happiest, amongst the humankind
Once I have achieved that mission
I would have conquered death, and sadness with one blow
Cause your smile is my provision
My energy to overcome the river of sadness’ flow
I hope I made u carefree
As you make me when you laugh
That happy face is the one I wish to see
The sight of u crying, cuts me in half
These golden words of love are heart born
As genuine as the human soul
From a magnificent rose u were torn
Sent down from heaven, to make my life whole
That river that started this poem has shifted
, changed course away from me
I still have you, and your smile that has lifted,
The cares of my heart, and set my mind free
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2007-02-08 11:00:03]
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Re: SMILE
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by MickeyPigKnuckles on
Thursday, 8th February 2007 @ 11:35:55 AM AEST
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trialnerror, How beautifully you have composed this heartfelt poem for your readers to savor. The vision you have painted with your words of art have created a vision of love within my minds eye. Thank You for giving this wonderful piece to read and feel. I also want to thank you for sharing a little of your creative personality with us all. Good Poem.
Mickey Pig Knuckles
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Re: SMILE
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by strawberryshortcake on
Thursday, 8th February 2007 @ 01:02:15 PM AEST
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| great poem. anyone can see that the person you are speaking of is very special to you. |
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