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waiting

Contributed by Phantomvampyress on Wednesday, 7th February 2007 @ 09:46:12 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



Where there is an end
that is where I seem to begin

will this be the end of the line?
or will everything rewind to repeat the cycle again?

holding on

staying strong

not giving in to the haunting fears

trying to make it through the rips and tears

standing still while all move ahead

in the distance I am.. further behind


when's my time?


Everyone is Gone

I am still standing here...


....waiting....

waiting....

to get somewhere

vampyress jenni




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Re: waiting (User Rating: 1 )
by yangdantien on Wednesday, 7th February 2007 @ 10:39:48 PM AEST
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Polish this pearl it will have a bright luster and great meaning for you as the shine comes up taking you into other worlds arriving in style.

Peace
AJ


Re: waiting (User Rating: 1 )
by MickeyPigKnuckles on Wednesday, 7th February 2007 @ 11:47:02 PM AEST
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Phantomvampyress, I hope you know how you have made my day, two great poems of yours have come my way. Another great write by such a talented author as this seems to almost be a fact of life as I have been waiting! waiting! for many years to get somewhere. I only thought water became stagnate lol. Each time you reach for and write with your poetic pen, this reading fan gets excited and displays a big warm grin.

Thanks for being you and my friend :)

Mickey Pig Knuckles
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Re: waiting (User Rating: 1 )
by Bruce on Thursday, 8th February 2007 @ 02:14:49 AM AEST
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GREAT WRITE


Re: waiting (User Rating: 1 )
by strawberryshortcake on Thursday, 8th February 2007 @ 01:11:26 PM AEST
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way to go!! this is super.


Re: waiting (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Thursday, 8th February 2007 @ 05:44:39 PM AEST
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Hey Jen~ Another top notch write by you my dear friend. The contents of your pages are impressive as always. Keep penning down your emotions for you do this so well. Rock on JenStar~
love n hugs,
dreamer


Re: waiting (User Rating: 1 )
by Bleedthelove on Thursday, 8th February 2007 @ 05:48:52 PM AEST
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Awesome poem. Very nicely written.


Re: waiting (User Rating: 1 )
by myheartsvoice on Thursday, 8th February 2007 @ 07:46:55 PM AEST
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Very interesting thoughts this poem bring's out. reminds me of the chinese proverb, " a journy of thousand miles begins with one foot step." Nicely done.


myheartsvoice


Re: waiting (User Rating: 1 )
by Rhei76 on Thursday, 8th February 2007 @ 08:13:40 PM AEST
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excellent piece
' sure you will achieve what you seek


Re: waiting (User Rating: 1 )
by Linds on Friday, 9th February 2007 @ 03:22:16 PM AEST
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I like this a lot..you have such talent.


Re: waiting (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Thursday, 15th February 2007 @ 08:59:32 AM AEST
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Jenni, has anyone ever told you that you do an amazing job writing how you feel?.. I think that you are very talented and that this poem was beautifully written..

Take care
Christina


Re: waiting (User Rating: 1 )
by Loriann on Wednesday, 21st February 2007 @ 03:40:18 PM AEST
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I really liked this .. It was very different. Good job.

Loriann


Re: waiting (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Wednesday, 25th April 2007 @ 03:39:50 PM AEST
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lovely expression of feeling which captures time...

love n' hugs nessa




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