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Someone Who Cares
Contributed by
Ari
on
Wednesday, 7th February 2007 @ 09:01:55 PM in AEST
Topic:
hbadday
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Fears racing around like cars in my head
Worried about what was better unsaid
Water is great unless you don't want to tread
Should've just waited until the dog got fed
Gold is great unless thats not what you mined
Could've figured youd just want to unwind
In time you may see that you wanted to find
Just another soul to treat you kind
But thats not the way it is
Oh no
We just keep on keepin on
For show
Living someone else's dream
For what?
Just give me my smile back
I'll trade it to someone else...
Passion for words, not quite there
How does it feel when they laugh and stare
Laughing behind just really isnt fair
Then again, do they really even care?
Reading someone else's mind, a dream
Never really knowing quite how you seem
The winner is whom? Which team?
When the loser just beams
But thats the way it could be
Just think
When everyone just knows
What to drink
Except for me
I don't know
But I will one day
I'll get my smile back
And trade it to someone
Someone who cares...
Copyright ©
Ari
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2007-02-07 21:01:55]
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Re: Someone Who Cares
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by MickeyPigKnuckles on
Wednesday, 7th February 2007 @ 09:12:03 PM AEST
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Ari, this is an awesome poem with great meaning that I think many will be able to relate to. Thank You for sharing your creative personality with all of us and for sharing a little of yourself. Great Poem.
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Re: Someone Who Cares
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by FRANCO on
Sunday, 11th February 2007 @ 07:19:18 AM AEST
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A wonderful poem to read, with carefully chosen words I truly enjoyed reading this poem . congrats.
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