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Cold Silence.
Contributed by
bleedthelove
on
Wednesday, 7th February 2007 @ 08:11:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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It Keeps descending,
It's never ending...
You never seem to try
But we're never gonna die...
I might kiss your face
And bite your lip,
But you will never feel a thing...
Your without emotions
Your heart unseen
And I can see the damage you've done...
I watched the greatest love I've known,
All come down to cold silence...
Well I'd take it back,
Take it back for you..
But time won't let me...
No, time just takes,
You further away...
and you could save it today...
but you wont say...
A single thing.
Copyright ©
bleedthelove
... [
2007-02-07 20:11:32]
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Re: Cold Silence.
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by SaintzAndSinnerz on
Wednesday, 7th February 2007 @ 08:37:03 PM AEST
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| Such a sad poem bleedthelove....so emotional. beautifully written. |
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Re: Cold Silence.
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 7th February 2007 @ 09:03:04 PM AEST
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wow this is a beautiful sad write.. its so well worded.. you can feel every penned word.. beauitful job
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: Cold Silence.
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by jdawg on
Thursday, 8th February 2007 @ 03:42:04 AM AEST
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wow, the way you word this poem and the flow of it makes me feel everthing you are saying, although a side one, yet a beautiful one. Keep your head high. thank you for sharing this poem.
much love,
J |
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