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love triangle
Contributed by
patti
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Wednesday, 7th February 2007 @ 07:49:36 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Love triangle that cannot be understood
only certain things of passion and betrayal would be revealed and will be carried into the minds of those who it effects
It is a bitter sweetmonster
that fails to be the outcome of any of its disasters
leads to no winners
just plain broken hearts and loneliness
you probably will never survive a broken heart
he/she will never remember
disasters can hit even the most loyal of loves
but nothing lasts forever
not even love
love dies
hearts die
loneliness will forever hold even in the most loveable places
a love traingle
of passion, hate and lust
happiness dosen't last forever
neither does life
scariness is always filled by our preoccupations of one another
denomination of equality
same old nonsense
same old days
create variety in your love
create scenario's
phrases
to fullfill a life that can be said is worth living
create a life w/ money, sex and lots of lust
desire is faith
desire to live
desire to love
desire to be loved
desire of being remembered
our so called faith has been uncovered
just a love triangle filled with desire
something most can say is understood or maybe even misunderstood
show your own door call your own identity
this is the love triangle that will fill the security of your life
Copyright ©
patti
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2007-02-07 19:49:36]
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Re: love triangle
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 7th February 2007 @ 08:11:51 PM AEST
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a very heart felt write.. so sad though.. soemtimes things dont' work out for the better and you always find the right one.. great write
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Re: love triangle
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by MickeyPigKnuckles on
Wednesday, 7th February 2007 @ 08:45:15 PM AEST
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patti, what an awesome poem you have created here as the message rings true for so many. This one hit me hard as I have had to survive this type of situation in the past and it about killed me and I still think of her every day as my heart will forever long for her. Its sad that she let another place that wedge and destroy something that was a cherished treasure to no longer be. Thank you so much for gently stroking my emotional cords with your brillence of poetic talent. This for sure is a wonderful reading pleasure and now it has become a beautiful memory to forever treasure.
Thank You patti.
Mickey Pig Knuckles
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