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the wrong is just right
Contributed by
crazyn
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Wednesday, 7th February 2007 @ 05:35:58 PM in AEST
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The wrong is just right.
It feels so wrong but I know its right
I wish I never let you go but now I am up for the fight
When we were kids we used to hold on so tight
You were so tall and beautiful I was lacking height
When you came back into my life it was like darkness turned to light
But all I want to say is I don’t want close my eyes because of your gorgeous sight
At this stage of your life you have to fight I will be your armour your sword and I take those wounds until it leaves me under a cloth that’s white
To me it felt like fate that after that one first kiss I was yours and you were mine
But will it be? That’s the question.
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crazyn
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2007-02-07 17:35:58]
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Re: the wrong is just right
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by Jen_unknown_to_myself on
Wednesday, 7th February 2007 @ 09:45:58 PM AEST
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| I like this poem alot........very good write keep it up!! |
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Re: the wrong is just right
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by Saloni on
Tuesday, 13th February 2007 @ 04:44:38 PM AEST
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i love this poem.. very emotional it made me cry..
i wish he never let go of me too.. the wrong is not always the right..
my first and last ever true loving man.. my love is always there.. the feelings.. the pain is always gonna stain.. der'z no medicine..
besides dat.. i love the contrast.. the feelings this poem really touched my heart.. im really impressed.. i thought u cudnt right love poems huh? goood keeep it up coz u makin so much progress..
i pray for you.. ur love wil always b der n im sure her love is there too..
keep it up.. god bless you... |
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Re: the wrong is just right
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by Saloni on
Tuesday, 13th February 2007 @ 04:48:27 PM AEST
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just had to post another comment!
i can't stop reading it...!
i love this poem so much! most of em all i love the poet who wrote this!! |
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Re: the wrong is just right
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 20th July 2014 @ 12:27:41 PM AEST
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beautifully heartfelt,
hugs n' love nessa |
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