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I dont know if I like this boy
Contributed by
shattered_soul
on
Wednesday, 7th February 2007 @ 02:03:27 PM in AEST
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I don’t know
If I really like him.
He is so sweet
So nice
But I don’t know
if I like this boy.
He can take care of me
Look over me
Help me with my pains
But I don’t know
If I like this boy.
He sings to me
Lyrics that just come to him
Singing my name softly
As if it were the last word
He hopes to have spoken
But I don’t know
If I like this boy.
When he touches me
Softly
As if I was fragile
Lovingly
As if I was his forever
But I don’t know
If I like this boy.
Whispering softly to me
How beautiful I am
How lucky he is
But I don’t know
If I like this boy.
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2007-02-07 14:03:27]
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Re: I dont know if I like this boy
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by MickeyPigKnuckles on
Wednesday, 7th February 2007 @ 03:21:27 PM AEST
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shattered_soul, I enjoyed this poem and say to let your heart be your guide. It will speak to you if you are in tune and listening. Thank You for sharing a little of yourself and especially your gift of poetry with us all. Nice poem.
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Re: I dont know if I like this boy
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by Fionndruinne on
Wednesday, 7th February 2007 @ 03:40:56 PM AEST
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If he moves too fast for you, then he is being self-centered, and doesn't truly care for you. Don't move any faster than you need to, and if he must needs adjust, so be it.
Keep writing. This has a nice flow to it.
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Re: I dont know if I like this boy
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by UnfallenTears on
Wednesday, 7th February 2007 @ 07:18:20 PM AEST
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Babe, don't move faster than you need to. Everyone has their own pace.
But I really like the poem. The repitition is used well. And the flow is really good.
You should definitely keep writing. |
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