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Attention
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rhei76
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Wednesday, 7th February 2007 @ 01:34:46 PM in AEST
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All I want is your attention
No need for Flowers in effection
No need for talk of destruction
Nor understanding for direction
I am a fool
Just for the knowing
You are watching
I lost my soul
out running my mouth
Just from talking
I am the fool
Out of my soul
Ranting & Raving
Raving to save
All that they gave
In order for me
To have the time
To find a smile
I am a fool
Simply finding me
In the attention pool
Because I believe
All I want is your attention
I am a fool
Just to know you are watching
I lost my soul
All just from talking
& I don't need you effection
These are the rules
I am only stating
These are the tools
That keep me calm and soothing
But like illusions they pull
The stars are lovely
Even over a moon so full
I am just stating
These are my tools
& pain is just an illussion
Copyright ©
rhei76
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2007-02-07 13:34:46]
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Re: Attention
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by myheartsvoice on
Wednesday, 7th February 2007 @ 02:19:15 PM AEST
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a most convincing carthasus, beautifuly honest and sincerely humble. In all a most
meaningful peice of writting, one that stems truly from the soul.
myheartsvoice
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Re: Attention
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 7th February 2007 @ 03:05:44 PM AEST
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a very honest felt write.. everyone needs a bit of attention sometimes.. well put into words
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Re: Attention
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by MickeyPigKnuckles on
Wednesday, 7th February 2007 @ 03:09:33 PM AEST
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rhei76, I really enjoyed the depthness of your composure here as its meaning became crystal clear. Thank you for sharing your talent of poetic literature and for giving us all a little of your very creative personality. Wonderful poem.
I also want to Thank you for giving me a moment of your time and then leaving a little of yourself through your awesome comment.
Mickey Pig Knuckles
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Re: Attention
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Thursday, 8th February 2007 @ 07:00:19 AM AEST
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Honest and deep. I liked this and I liked how you described yourself in this. Great poem. I really liked this..
Take care
Christina-xo |
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