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Spin Me A Story
Contributed by
Tanna
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Saturday, 22nd February 2003 @ 11:30:00 AM in AEST
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Spin me a heartfelt story
While I rest my weary head
Be it a tale of love and glory
Or one filled with woe and dread
Haunt me with your bittersweet words
Soothe me with your melancholy song
Dazzle me with its sheer beauty
For nothing you write is wrong
With a stroke of your pen to paper
Or the touch of your finger to a key
You allow me entrance to your little world
And your muse, you allow me to see
So unravel your thoughts into words
Let me apply them like balm to my soul
Transport me from my worries
Help me to again become whole
Images set forth so vividly
They set my imagination free
A wondrous journey, a gift from your heart
You've earned gratitude from me.
Copyright ©
Tanna
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2003-02-22 11:30:00]
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Re: Spin Me A Story
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by SugarCoatedSweetness on
Saturday, 22nd February 2003 @ 12:13:52 PM AEST
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| Aww This Poem... Was Really Thoughtfull... And Oh So Sweet!!! I Like It Very Much... Great Write... And Thanks For Sharing What's In Your Heart!!! ;o) |
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Re: Spin Me A Story
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by wyrd_faerie on
Saturday, 22nd February 2003 @ 03:30:04 PM AEST
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| ooh...this is lovely...thankyou, and the same goes to you too.... |
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Re: Spin Me A Story
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by DreamWeaver on
Saturday, 22nd February 2003 @ 06:11:31 PM AEST
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| Great write Tanna ... I'm glad you joined this site so that we are able to read your wonderful poetry as well. I love the flow of this, and it is so true that it doesn't matter whether it is happy or sad - the poetry on this site is a balm to the soul. .... Jan |
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Re: Spin Me A Story
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by karoody on
Sunday, 23rd February 2003 @ 01:12:33 AM AEST
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| my sentiments exactly, tanna! i wish i could read and comment on them all, but my body needs rest, food, and water for some inconveniencing reason! lol |
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Re: Spin Me A Story
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 23rd February 2003 @ 06:31:09 AM AEST
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Tanna, this is absolutely beautiful... Thank you... I too, am not able to read all the poems I would like to read here....
Jenni |
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Re: Spin Me A Story
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by venkat on
Monday, 24th February 2003 @ 02:45:56 AM AEST
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| Awww! this one is wonderfully drawn .. I welcme you to read all my poems like ' the sweetest one' ' a lovely kiss' ' in your most beautiful face'. etc .and I promise that you will not be bored or tired in reading them. you can find a diffrent world. I am to say that except two or three poems almost all based on most blissful experiences or beautifuldreams i had in my life time. I am also to let you know that You may perchance reap some benefit by reading me .. venkat |
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Re: Spin Me A Story
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by Varro on
Monday, 24th February 2003 @ 04:57:23 PM AEST
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Tanna; You have the gift. This sums it up..poetry is revealing our soul, our wishes, our deepest desires. Like you, it is a gift we give others...everyone can appreciate a good and well written poem.
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Re: Spin Me A Story
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 4th March 2003 @ 10:40:19 PM AEST
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| wow! this is excellent!! thank you too, your talent shines here my friend, love and huggs always nessa |
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