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Hold On To Love
Contributed by
myheartsvoice
on
Wednesday, 7th February 2007 @ 10:25:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Hold
on to love
for it's all
that is
real,
if
love
should
find you
let it know
how you
feel.
To
soon
life is
over and
then we
die,
alone
we are
left bitter
tears to
cry.
Hold
on to love
as long as you can
worry not about dream's
or a some foolish
plan,
dream's
are for sleeping
and life has it's ruels
with
love you
must build
but you first
need the
tool's.
Hold
on to love
with all of your might
let it touch you like shaddows
touching the night,
be
not afraid
to let love in
all you must do
is simply
begin.
myheartsvoice
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myheartsvoice
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2007-02-07 10:25:30]
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Re: Hold On To Love
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by MickeyPigKnuckles on
Wednesday, 7th February 2007 @ 10:45:56 AM AEST
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myheartsvoice, this is beautiful in every meaning of the word. The format, word choices, and emotional content make this perfect for your readers to savor. Thank you so much for sharing your emotional, creative personality with all of us and especially for sharing your love of poetry with the world of readers. Awesome poem.
Mickey Pig Knuckles :)
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Re: Hold On To Love
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by Soccerflyer27 on
Wednesday, 7th February 2007 @ 11:29:20 AM AEST
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I love the style this poem is typed in. The words touch me as well, which is important in poetry. Great work!
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Re: Hold On To Love
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by strawberryshortcake on
Wednesday, 7th February 2007 @ 11:58:33 AM AEST
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| great work. excellent choice of words to express such emotion. good flow. |
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Re: Hold On To Love
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 7th February 2007 @ 12:45:47 PM AEST
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I absolutely loved this piece.. i like the way you had it laid out.. another beautiful write from you!!
vampyress Jenni |
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Re: Hold On To Love
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by yangdantien on
Wednesday, 7th February 2007 @ 01:08:27 PM AEST
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The centered slender delicate shape of these words fits oh so perfectly with your hearts voice to reinforce holding on to love. I would only add how incredibly delicate is the shadows touch in the night...
Excellent
Peace
Yang |
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Re: Hold On To Love
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by Rhei76 on
Wednesday, 7th February 2007 @ 01:43:22 PM AEST
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beautiful words to a emotions message
everyone needs some one
and when you find them, you should
do what it takes |
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Re: Hold On To Love
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Friday, 9th February 2007 @ 04:11:28 PM AEST
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MyHeartsVoice as I came to comment today I made sure I came to your pages first. I so much needed a smile and thanks so much to you that's what I got. Beautifully penned your words are spoken from the heart~
Thank you so much for sharing this with us.
warm hugs,
dreamer~ |
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