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Forgotten Ring
Contributed by
LouisaMontagu
on
Wednesday, 7th February 2007 @ 04:32:31 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Im sorry id forgotten you
Placed safely on the side
Protected by a layer of dust
In your box you hide
Shut away cold and dark
Im sorry I forgot you
In my defence, like me and him
You’re not required too
“Joined as one” I once wrote
But now your sparkle is dim
So happy you perched on my finger
But now you remind me of him
Once you looked so stunning
It seems you’ve lost your glow
The dancing spectrum colours
Like my love, faded slow
Im sorry id forgotten you
For a memory of life you bind
Im sorry I can’t wear you again
Haunting promises plague my mind
I’ll polish you up
And pass you on
My love, commitment just like your glow
They’ve gone
Im sorry id forgotten you
My heart can no longer sing
Im sorry id forgotten you
My committed engagement ring...
Author: Louisa Montagu
(cc) BBRymz Productions
Copyright ©
LouisaMontagu
... [
2007-02-07 04:32:31]
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Re: Forgotten Ring
(User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 7th February 2007 @ 10:12:49 AM AEST
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i really enjoyed this piece.. its a very creative write on an old engagment ring.. I really liked this one. it has a nice flow and perfect wording.. great job
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Re: Forgotten Ring
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by MickeyPigKnuckles on
Wednesday, 7th February 2007 @ 10:40:13 AM AEST
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LouisaMontagu, Your words of poetry are so beautifully orchestrated by a very gifted poet. The emotional content reaches right out to your reading fans and brings them closer to you, touching peoples lives with the warmness of love is what you do. I now must thank you for giving us yet another reading pleasure as this particular fan now has gained another poetic treasure. Wonderful poem.
Your Reading Fan
Mickey Pig Knuckles
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Re: Forgotten Ring
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by Adrianna on
Wednesday, 7th February 2007 @ 04:46:31 PM AEST
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| I love this poem. I can really connect to it. |
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