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Mixing it Up

Contributed by yangdantien on Wednesday, 7th February 2007 @ 02:20:51 AM in AEST
Topic: abstract










Cute meets Hot.
Flour and water,
milk to paste,
she donates a few
eggs in waiting,
he brings butter and spice
which pans out,
batter up,
the oven radiates from warming.

Tooth pick test,
Pi in ratio to circumvent,
so take every part of yourself
and shift it all to the left.
Every thought and lean of weight,
take everything you are,
in your mind, in your head,
and push into the sinister.

Inhale, raise your left arm
slightly bent as to signal traffic,
spread fingers, palm wide,
place right hand above and
short lace fingers,
as right tips slide,
bending at the second joint.
Gauche digits stretched,
straight and rigid.

Sit awhile, imagine lines
extending in braids,
from every cell,
focus on the ones
streaming in salute
off your finger pads,
make or feel golden beams
from the belly button with hidden
electric wires macramé and
knot with the universe at large.

Trace back our roots
how we divided to multiply
from the age when we first swam;
as ocean creatures for most of
our biological existence.
Older than dry land,
breathe the sea delicious as
life courses along our pulse.
Gills in conjunction
with what is now our nose,
septum's inflated,
breathe and snap your fingers,
right hand pulling through
over the ancient memory of webbings.

See it, set,
now do it again.
Directly in front of your eyes,
watch the lines connect to reclaim our
unity in true heritage.

Switch!
Push all of your self,
even these new found parts,
to the right, not by force but by intent.
Make all of your self and thoughts
shift to dexterity,
raise your right arm to stop,
hand extended, palm wide,
grasp over knuckle backs,
bend left fingers in the crooks
dovetails to the second joint,
to pluck the energy skein,
and remember the elastic skin
that used to spread there.
Comprehend to try again.

Pan or molds overflowing,
risen, warmed, toasted
golden brown in color,
and like our kisses,
they must cool
before we dress to decorate.
Court ship remains
maiden voyage integral
to all the shapes
that got us here.

Agreed the time is right ?
Stop eating frosting off the shelf,
flatten out the can.
Here is a bakers knife,
fat and wide to spread,
in layers around
all divisions sum.
So many nourish
by mood and indulgence,
but when prepared
with heart,
a cake is marriage in
true bond, story honored,
to enjoy each slice,
as part of the whole shebang.




AJPIII





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Re: Mixing it Up (User Rating: 1 )
by Dom on Wednesday, 7th February 2007 @ 03:06:44 AM AEST
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Wow! This poem is amazing its so detailed and intricate with truly beautiful imagery, I love the first stanza. You are a very gifted poet,

Dom


Re: Mixing it Up (User Rating: 1 )
by MisfitMe on Wednesday, 7th February 2007 @ 03:54:07 AM AEST
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No less than a thousand poems could I create around this...

"breathe the sea delicious"

As to the rest...your telling had the ring of leadership to it. Leadership that is comforting not oppressive, kinda' like being talked through a visualization exercise by a master!

"See it, set,
now do it again.
Directly in front of your eyes,
watch the lines connect to reclaim our
unity in true heritage."~you

"okay..."~me

"Switch!
Push all of your self,
even these new found parts,
to the right, not by force but by intent."~you

"okay..."~me

Are you a hypnotist?*Wink*

w/ Love & Admiration Always,
~KerryLynne



Re: Mixing it Up (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Wednesday, 7th February 2007 @ 10:14:41 AM AEST
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wow such a creative deep piece.. I really enjoyed this one and the imgery in this .. great job

vampyress jenni


Re: Mixing it Up (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Wednesday, 7th February 2007 @ 10:52:47 AM AEST
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wow that is a very creative piece.
i am very impress with this write.
the pictures kinda makes you feel like your on lsd.lol oops
anyways you did an awsome job in this.


Re: Mixing it Up (User Rating: 1 )
by MickeyPigKnuckles on Wednesday, 7th February 2007 @ 11:01:06 AM AEST
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yangdantien, My dear friend, I now must take my hat off and bow before your greatness. I commend you for a masterful composure of poetic literature that is both entertaining and extremely creative. Thank you for sharing your refined gift with us all. Excellent work.

Mickey Pig Knuckles
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Re: Mixing it Up (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 7th February 2007 @ 12:32:56 PM AEST
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Dang Yang!! What a recipe! So intricately vivid one has to read it over 'n' over so's to bake it right! Just plain ol' magnificent writing, as well as, enjoyable reading, pard.

wabl
KenMoore
cowboy


Re: Mixing it Up (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Wednesday, 7th February 2007 @ 10:10:55 PM AEST
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You clever poet~ My gosh dearest AJ~ The contents of your pages are just awesome my dear friend~ I love the way you construct and word your writes. The pictures are just "wow"
I'm so sorry that I just don't have the up beat
words to give ur brilliant write the credit that
it so much deserves.

So many nourish
by mood and indulgence,
but when prepared
with heart,
a cake is marriage in
true bond, story honored,
to enjoy each slice,
as part of the whole shebang.

Absolutely Love these lines~
Write on my dear poetic friend. Your writes
are *brilliant*
love, hugs n blessings ur fan,
sue m


Re: Mixing it Up (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Thursday, 8th February 2007 @ 09:06:41 PM AEST
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There you go.....The recepie, and more. ... As I have said, what a flow of such that comes from one who can set the mind to create......!!!!!!! It created a time, and mood and such more...But what kind of cake is it?!lol.....:)....Such admirers for this one. Only could it be baked, that easily? From one Epicecuran(however its spelt,) to another Chef........BRILLIANT> I will follow,with ease.

Brew~


Re: Mixing it Up (User Rating: 1 )
by CuriousitysCat on Saturday, 24th February 2007 @ 01:29:57 PM AEST
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This is very beautiful in an abtract way. My absolute connecting point and favorite part was this:
"Tooth pick test,
Pi in ratio to circumvent,
so take every part of yourself
and shift it all to the left."
It's got this great knowing feel but yet an experience wrapped all into it self. Your writes my friend are never less then stunning, always amazing.


~JaZz




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