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MISS ADDICTION
Contributed by
soulsearching43
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Tuesday, 6th February 2007 @ 09:17:13 PM in AEST
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SHE LURES YOU WITH HER DECEITFUL WAYS, WITH PROMISES OF BETTER DAYS
YOU GO ALONG JUST TO SEE, FULL OF AWE AND CURIOSITY
BEFORE YOU KNOW IT HER HOOKS ARE IN, AND YOUR LIFE BEGINS ITS DOWNWARD SPIN
YOU TRY TO ESCAPE BUT ITS NO USE, FOR SHE'S TRAPPED YOU IN HER WORLD OF ABUSE
SHE STRIPS YOU DOWN RIGHT TO YOUR SOUL. FOR THIS HAS BEEN HER ONE TRUE GOAL
YOU THOUGHT YOU COULD PLAY AND WALK AWAY UNBRUSHED, BUT WHEN YOUR THIS CLOSE TO HELL YOUR NEVER UNTOUCHED
NOW SHE'S YOUR LOVER AND ONLY FRIEND, SHE'LL BE WITH YOU ALWAYS RIGHT TO THE END
THIS ROMANCE THAT STARTED JUST FOR FUN, HAS NOW BECOME YOUR ONLY ONE
SHE CALLS YOUR NAME DAY AND NIGHT, AND ITS NO USE YOU CAN NOT FIGHT
YOUR LIFE WITH HER IS FULL OF PAIN, YOU LOSE YOUR MIND AND GO INSANE
YOU JUST DONT KNOW HOW THIS HAPPENED TO YOU, YOU CANT FIGURE IT OUT DONT HAVE A CLUE
ALL YOU WANTED WAS A LITTLE RELEASE, AND NOW YOU'LL NEVER TRUELY KNOW PEACE
SO YOU TRIED TO ESCAPE YOUR LIFE FULL OF FRICTION, AND YOU MADE THE MISTAKE OF SLEEPING WITH MISS ADDICTION
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Re: MISS ADDICTION
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by Kellros on
Tuesday, 6th February 2007 @ 10:26:56 PM AEST
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| Good write, pulled me in :P |
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Re: MISS ADDICTION
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by yangdantien on
Wednesday, 7th February 2007 @ 02:45:22 AM AEST
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You brought the soul-digger to life and now can dismiss her for addiction can inversely mean a habit or behavior without speech or words (A - Diction) in a downward spiral toward the dysfunctional and death. Please keep writing and posting to work it out here at the 'Y'
Good Job
Peace
Yangdantien
PS Free yourself from capitalizations web etiquette has all caps as yelling. |
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Re: MISS ADDICTION
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by heatherslostdreams on
Wednesday, 7th February 2007 @ 02:33:06 PM AEST
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great write i like how you give a face to something most dont see i appreciate that you took the time to put time into writing this
great job
your friend
heather
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Re: MISS ADDICTION
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by Sena on
Wednesday, 7th February 2007 @ 03:28:48 PM AEST
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| Nice read. Thanks for sharing. |
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Re: MISS ADDICTION
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by Whitfields on
Tuesday, 13th March 2007 @ 02:01:28 PM AEST
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| good write. i know everything that you are talking about
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