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Lies
Contributed by
liindso14
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Tuesday, 6th February 2007 @ 09:09:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Why do you always accuse me of lying
You always say im not trying
School is hard enough without you on my back
Ill tell you that truth is not what I lack
You alwats call to check up on me
Where else do you think id be?
A party?A rave?A different city?
Im only fifteen!
Ive never backstabbed a friend
Not one secret have I told
These lie accussations are getting old
Please leave me alone mom
I dont do drugs and I dont drink
I can't figure out what would make you think
That everything i say is "glib" as you say
Ive never been one to betray
I told you the truth and now im grounded
You dropped me off at school and left me astounded
Dad trusts me but why dont you?
What did I do?
I tell you im not good at Spanish and you say its because I dont study
You put me down and ruined my night
I never want to fight
But it always ends up in one
Im so done with this
You tell me im a negative person
I dont really care about your assumption
If you think im a liar thats fine
It makes me sad but I guess you dont mind
So im sorry
But its not true so it isnt something of which I worry
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liindso14
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2007-02-06 21:09:10]
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Re: Lies
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by heatherslostdreams on
Tuesday, 6th February 2007 @ 10:00:40 PM AEST
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good write but take it from me parents will always worry and in todays society young kids get out of hand just take it with a grain of salt and with age things will change im not much older than you and have been there to show something to her and try with everything you got and she will eventually see that everything she says is really not meant to be. i wish i would have had my mom to care about and say these things when i was 15 but i was the one caring for her so be greatful shes there and she cares because there are those out there that wish that they had that dont take it for granted! good write though and i enjoyed keep it coming!
your friend
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Re: Lies
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by soulsearching43 on
Wednesday, 7th February 2007 @ 06:34:45 AM AEST
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you write very well for some one so young. i wonder have you showed this to your mom
you know sometimes when your a parent fear of the unknown can be a very powerful
and very frightening thing. it sounds like your mom really loves you if she didnt she wouldnt even bother. try showing her some of your work it may open a new line of communication for you both. |
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Re: Lies
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by Sena on
Wednesday, 7th February 2007 @ 03:44:11 PM AEST
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| Nice write. Keep writing, even when things get better. You have a talent; embrace it; nurture it. Thanks for sharing & good luck to you. |
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