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Korea II

Contributed by The_Phantom on Saturday, 22nd February 2003 @ 10:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Where do I start, my world just fell apart,
The news came today, I've been extended another 90 days,
North Korea wants a war, all I want is to hold you in my arms,
But now I have to stay, cause North Korea wants to be brave,

I havn't seen my wife in a year, I've lost count of the tears,
The sky is gray, as it continoues to rain,
It's damp and cold, and I have no one to hold,
I'm lost in this horrid place, dreaming of your beauitiful face,

I want to cry, I'm dieing on the inside,
I'm living a nightmare, it seems no one cares,
I understand my country needs me, and I do this to keep Amercia free,
But still it makes no since, why can't I be home with my kids,

I always do my best, I don't get much rest,
I just want to go home, I'm tried of being alone,
I don't expect people to know how I feel,
My family, and YPDC are the only thing that seems real,

So here I go opening that door, asking for your love once more,
My heart has broken in two, Lord knows how much I love you,
I'm lost within myself, can anybody help,
Lord I come to you, allow me to go home.

Forever Faithful
The Phantom




Copyright © The_Phantom ... [ 2003-02-22 10:00:00]
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Re: Korea II (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Saturday, 22nd February 2003 @ 10:46:48 AM AEST
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Awww Matt... I'm so terribly sorry.... I know how devastating that news must have been. I will continue to pray for your safety... Your Ldy and kids must be so disappointed too...
*wipes a tear*
Hugs,
Jenni


Re: Korea II (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 22nd February 2003 @ 12:02:20 PM AEST
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My prayers are with you and your family. Stay strong.
~Tanna


Re: Korea II (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Saturday, 22nd February 2003 @ 05:20:48 PM AEST
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Great poem ma man. I wish your army cared more about her soldiers. Stay strong. Hopefully the time will fly by.

Bobo (Joel)


Re: Korea II (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 22nd February 2003 @ 05:56:08 PM AEST
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ohhh im so sorry! argg, i wish i could change things, and you could go home right now! this whole thing brings me to tears, much love, strength and huggs to you and yours, ever your friend, nessa


Re: Korea II (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Saturday, 22nd February 2003 @ 06:17:07 PM AEST
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Oh, I didn't know .. I'm so sorry. I can't imagine how painful your feelings must be to not see your loved ones for a year and then to have it extended. It must be a great relief to have this site to communicate in some way. God bless you, stay safe. Wonderful write. ... Jan


Re: Korea II (User Rating: 1 )
by Dani on Saturday, 22nd February 2003 @ 08:23:36 PM AEST
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Awww.... beautiful write.... stay strong


Re: Korea II (User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on Sunday, 23rd February 2003 @ 01:17:38 AM AEST
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i can only imagine how this feels...tis a terrible thing that the need for defense is there, but i greatly appreciate the fact that you were strong enough to sign up...in hopes of you seeing home soon...kara


Re: Korea II (User Rating: 1 )
by LadyDama on Sunday, 23rd February 2003 @ 03:40:49 AM AEST
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blessings to you and yours, and i prayer for your safe return to your wife and children as soon as possible... moving poem...


Re: Korea II (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Sunday, 23rd February 2003 @ 10:09:40 AM AEST
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OMG Phantom I so feel for you I couldnt imagine the pain & greif you & your wife are feeling! And I though not seeing my husband during the week was bad! I will pray for you to get home to your family God bless in all you do! Christina


Re: Korea II (User Rating: 1 )
by wyrd_faerie on Sunday, 23rd February 2003 @ 04:06:02 PM AEST
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this is so beautiful...i'm so sorry...


Re: Korea II (User Rating: 1 )
by CowgirlKid on Sunday, 23rd February 2003 @ 09:10:28 PM AEST
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You're in my prayers. God cares. I'm so sorry


Re: Korea II (User Rating: 1 )
by Cutey on Thursday, 13th March 2003 @ 01:24:28 AM AEST
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ANNYONG HA SE YO

i want to say i can feel your pain and can see how hard and tough it is on you being there way from your family and kids i wish you all the best in life and i pray to god that you all make it home safe and sound and i'm very proud of all you men and woman that stand up for your country i'm be hide you 100% on that i have been doing my best to show the men and woman that no matter where they are they are loved and care for .
Tracey




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