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True 'Till Death

Contributed by R0b on Tuesday, 6th February 2007 @ 05:54:21 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



One day.
Some days.
I'm lost with you.
I'm lost without you.
You seem to pay attention.
But how do I know.
Some days I don’t.
Whats wrong with this story.
How could things be this wrong?
When they were so good.
Did we make a wrong turn?
Some days are cloudier than others.
Then some days it rains.
It rains in my soul and in my head.
A flood of thoughts and emotions.
Reasons with out meaning.
Question that will go unanswered.
Feelings that stain my heart forever.
Things I can never forget.
Things I don’t want to remember.
Things that leave me asking why?
And things that leave me speechless.
How did we get here?
Why are we like this?
This story is all wrong,
Not how I pictured it.
How about you?
The storm clouds hang over my thoughts .
Unable to make sense of it all.
Im walking a fine line of loosing it all.
With no one to guide me I’m going in blind.
Running on pure emotion.
Not letting up.
Never letting go.
For this is my life.
You are my future.
You are my everything.
And I will never quit.
As long as I can breathe.
I will carry on.
I will love you.
I will cherish you.
Although times can be rough.
And they can be gray.
I will carry on .
I will love you.
I will cherish you.
Time won’t stop and neither will we.
It’s full speed ahead from here.
What happens does.
We take them head on .
Push them aside.
And move forward.
My life with you is:
Complete
And I love every minute of it.
I have faults as much as you.
It’s our love that makes them disappear.
Because:
Time won’t stop and neither will we.
It’s full speed ahead from here.
What happens does.
We take them head on .
Push them aside.
Everything will be fine.
I promise.
I love you Christina.
And I always will.
I will always love you.
I will always be true to you.
I will always protect you.
I will always care for you.
and I will always be here for you.


No looking back & No Regrets!






Rob
2/6/2007







Copyright © R0b ... [ 2007-02-06 17:54:21]
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Re: True 'Till Death (User Rating: 1 )
by heatherslostdreams on Tuesday, 6th February 2007 @ 06:33:55 PM AEST
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I wanted to say that i really like this poem and the dedication of love that is in it great job. reminds me of some of the stuff that i would write good job man keep it coming chirsitina is a very lucky girl to have someone love her that much.

your friend
heather
aka
heatherslostdreams


Re: True 'Till Death (User Rating: 1 )
by soulsearching43 on Tuesday, 6th February 2007 @ 09:32:21 PM AEST
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very few people are lucky enough to find a love so deep cherish it always great poem


Re: True 'Till Death (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Wednesday, 7th February 2007 @ 07:10:49 AM AEST
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I have been staring at this comment box for about 5 minutes now...Trying too comprehend and understand what I just read.. I actually do not know what to say..I am racking my brain trying to come up with something to say and I should probably stop thinking with my mind and just listen to my heart...

Honestly. This made me cry.. I read it twice and both times I cried... Not good considering I was in the computer lab... You know that I love you Rob.. I always pay attention to you.. God.. I am going to cry again.. I always pay attention.. And thinking that you don't know if I am.. hurts me...

From the upper half of this poem honestly all that I got out of this was that you aren't happy... And that makes me sad.. This whole poem makes me sad.. Beacause I always wanted you to be happy and I wanted to be better than past girlfriends that you have had and I wanted to be better than Heather and I wanted to make you laugh and smile.. I never wanted to make you feel this way and I know that I am an emotional roller coaster but please you are the only who doesn't run from me and who doesn't try to ignore my feelings and cover them up.. And it made me feel like its my fault that you are feeling this way.. I know. I always put the blame upon me, but that it just what I have taught myself to do..

Rob.. I love you. I have always loved you. And I am sorry that you have to go through this but I am going through it as well.. I question things a lot too.. And yeah you are right we both have changed. We are growing up. We get influeneced by others. And I am just so sorry.. That things have succumbed to this..

Well I love you Rob and nothing will change that.. You are my best friend.. And I think we need to sit down and talk about things on friday or something..

I love you. Good poem..
Love always
Christina


Re: True 'Till Death (User Rating: 1 )
by richcol7522 on Friday, 27th April 2007 @ 07:55:48 AM AEST
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You are so very fortunate to have someone that you love so much and love just as much in return. Good job man...keep it up.

Rich




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