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Fatal Flaw
Contributed by
desolantdreamer
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Tuesday, 6th February 2007 @ 09:07:19 AM in AEST
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So kind
So nice
You are just amazing
How someone could be so perfect for me
I could never understand
But you aren't perfect are you?
You have one fatal flaw
You don't like me back at all
So cute
So sweet
You're wonderful it's true
How someone could be so great
I'll never ever know
But you aren't all that great are you?
You still have that fatal flaw
You don't notice me, not at all
So magnificent
So awesome
You're perfect it is true
How I got with you I'll never ever know
But grateful I will always be
Will you be grateful too?
Now that fatal flaw is gone
And you love me too
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desolantdreamer
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2007-02-06 09:07:19]
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Re: Fatal Flaw
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by Channing on
Tuesday, 6th February 2007 @ 09:45:27 AM AEST
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Awesome poem, I have experienced the same kind of flaw...good thing they disappear!
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Re: Fatal Flaw
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by little_genna on
Wednesday, 21st February 2007 @ 02:40:45 PM AEST
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how about when they do notice you and fall in love then forget that you're right in front of them and they find someone they think if better so they break your heart and then come running back because its not better?
man im not bitter...much....
anyway this poem is amazing. i love the structure to it and it had my attention to the very end which is a pretty hard task these days..... |
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