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Winter Wonder Land
Contributed by
xXx_Fem_Fatale_xXx
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Monday, 5th February 2007 @ 02:37:34 PM in AEST
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ChildrensPoetry
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On a cold winter's day
Your little footprints
Making a trail
Embedded in fresh snow
Hands reaching up
Catching snowflakes
Falling from the sky high above
Me little Miss glow face,
Enjoying every little thing
As you wander around
In Winter Wonder Land.
~~Nats~~
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Re: Winter Wonder Land
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by deadheadpoet on
Tuesday, 6th February 2007 @ 11:26:50 AM AEST
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Awww Nats, This was great. I love watching my kids out in the snow and I'll never forget the first time each of them experienced snow. I could see your little one. *smiles*
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Re: Winter Wonder Land
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by yangdantien on
Tuesday, 6th February 2007 @ 02:11:45 PM AEST
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In this brief write I too felt my first time in the snow what a joy. I can only imagine years from now she will share this poem with her daughter who will also be a glow face.
Well Done.
Peace
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Re: Winter Wonder Land
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by feralpen on
Monday, 12th February 2007 @ 07:38:53 AM AEST
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...and when her world is covered white
in purity and grace...
...teach her of snow angels...
your little Miss glow face
Your poem to your daughter is so full of love, so tender. I'm sure she will cherish this and hold it... and you... so very dear.
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Re: Winter Wonder Land
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Sunday, 25th March 2007 @ 02:24:59 AM AEST
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It's nice that you have captured the innocence of youth for her to look back on .
At that age everything is enchanting, mysterious and pure.Only when we get older do we become cynical.
I'm sure it will be a treasured memento for her
Steve xx
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Re: Winter Wonder Land
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 12th April 2010 @ 02:00:32 AM AEST
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I really like this Nats. Made me reminisce about my daughter's childhood. Thank you.  |
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