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B.r.o.k.e.n Reflection (2 Cinquains)
Contributed by
FleurdeSang
on
Monday, 5th February 2007 @ 02:23:57 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Shadows
Molesting your
Sanity, jagged bones
Forgotten in your dark closet
Rotting.
Shattered
Glass embedded
In your trembling fist
Denying the cold truth in the
Mirror.
Copyright ©
FleurdeSang
... [
2007-02-05 14:23:57]
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Re: B.r.o.k.e.n Reflection (2 Cinquains)
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 5th February 2007 @ 06:07:33 PM AEST
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oh stepy, hun .. your words are so painful to read, but as always
you take dark to the deepest level.
Cold .. so much so, that I am no shivering. You have a power
hun. An incredible power to evoke the darkest emotions ..
exceptional write, not unlike your many other amazing creations ..
*hugs you*
hope you are okay ..
~Breezy |
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Re: B.r.o.k.e.n Reflection (2 Cinquains)
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by yangdantien on
Tuesday, 6th February 2007 @ 09:58:27 AM AEST
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This piece is a two fisted blow, thumbs tucked in italics, which punches this poem into to a bruise of deep meaning.
Bravo Brave Blood Flower
Peace
Yangdantien |
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