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inside of anger
Contributed by
Phantomvampyress
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Sunday, 4th February 2007 @ 08:15:37 PM in AEST
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Chains of anger holding you down
inside the mouth of this hatred you shall drown
covered in staples and burnt flesh
trying to crawl outside of yourself
vampyress Jenni
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Phantomvampyress
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Re: inside of anger
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by Bleedthelove on
Sunday, 4th February 2007 @ 08:37:32 PM AEST
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| Short but very deep. You managed to put alot of emotion into just a few words. Excellent job. |
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Re: inside of anger
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by dalamar on
Sunday, 4th February 2007 @ 09:19:39 PM AEST
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| Very cool. Nice right I love it |
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Re: inside of anger
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by MickeyPigKnuckles on
Monday, 5th February 2007 @ 12:07:57 AM AEST
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Phantomvampyress, What a reality poem you have composed here that is true for so many in our current society. I recall a time of life when everyone knew and loved everyone as the crime rates were so low and people actually respected one another. The question is do we blame ourselves? Do we blame the media? Or do we blame the daily pressures of society performance demands which turn us from human to almost robotic puppets. I apologize for gettin onto my soap box as this type of poem usually prompts deep pondering thoughts. Now let me thank you for sharing your fine talent and for giving us all a little more of Jenni.
Mickey Pig Knuckles :) |
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Re: inside of anger
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by a7x36 on
Monday, 5th February 2007 @ 03:51:31 AM AEST
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| i love gruesome poetry........ make it longer and even more graphic! |
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Re: inside of anger
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by deadheadpoet on
Monday, 5th February 2007 @ 10:48:44 AM AEST
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Brief write but stinging as hell. Well done.
Peace, Laura |
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Re: inside of anger
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by yangdantien on
Monday, 5th February 2007 @ 11:53:09 AM AEST
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For me this is a round-about yet perfect description of the poison of anger in ones body and certainly when so consumed with rage one must crawl out from under it as it is a glass ceiling pressing down upon the rooms of ones mind.
Bravo
Be at Peace
AJ |
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Re: inside of anger
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by myheartsvoice on
Wednesday, 7th February 2007 @ 02:02:48 PM AEST
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This one is quite intense and quite true i might add, the first line says it all only to well.
Beautiful work you do, you never cease to amaze me. I love your impusivness.
myheartsvoice
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Re: inside of anger
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Wednesday, 7th February 2007 @ 09:20:22 PM AEST
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Hey Jen~
A short and very intense write. Thought provoking too.You say so much in so little amount of words my dear friend.
A deep write penned so well. Thank you
for sharing your work with us Jen~
love n hugs,
sue m |
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Re: inside of anger
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by needledancing on
Monday, 14th May 2007 @ 11:40:19 PM AEST
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| You certainly can pack a great punch with so few words. Imaginative and drives directly to the point. |
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