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The Closeness Of You
Contributed by
myheartsvoice
on
Sunday, 4th February 2007 @ 07:22:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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The
closeness
of you i always
feel no matter what
i do,
for
in my
heart is
where i keep
the sweetest
part of
you.
The
closeness
of you is everywhere
seen only by these eye's,
felt amidst this life we share
our love has no demise.
The
closeness
of you is always
with me i carry it
day and night, like a
spiritual being inside
my soul you are
my guiding
light.
The
closeness
of you is never
gone as long as i
can feel,
your
my dream
at night and
my kiss at
dawn
in
my heart
your all that's
real.
myheartsvoice
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myheartsvoice
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2007-02-04 19:22:17]
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Re: The Closeness Of You
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by PhantomVampyress on
Sunday, 4th February 2007 @ 08:06:18 PM AEST
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I like the style of this.. beautifully done and well worded.. great expression of love and devotion
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Re: The Closeness Of You
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by MickeyPigKnuckles on
Monday, 5th February 2007 @ 12:59:58 AM AEST
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myheartsvoice, You are one fine poet and so very appreciated by many for sharing your gift with all. The format and especially the message of this poem is so emotionally beautiful. Thank You.
Mickey Pig Knuckles :) |
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Re: The Closeness Of You
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by yangdantien on
Monday, 5th February 2007 @ 12:07:03 PM AEST
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How fortunate whoever is:
"...for
in my
heart is
where i keep
the sweetest
part of
you..."
Ah I must admit I did a mental 'Snoopy' dance as this is real loving, the art holding the best of the other deep within our hearts.
Well Done
Peace
Yang |
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Re: The Closeness Of You
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by Dom on
Monday, 5th February 2007 @ 12:45:11 PM AEST
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The form of this poem is beautiful and the words are so sweet and honest. You have a real gift for writing poetry,
Dom |
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Re: The Closeness Of You
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by Rhei76 on
Monday, 5th February 2007 @ 01:50:23 PM AEST
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so passionate
i wish some one had the elegance to write something like this to me.
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Re: The Closeness Of You
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 5th February 2007 @ 04:57:23 PM AEST
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This was completely beautiful .. the title drew me in
and the continuity of that theme was soft and lovely ..
throughout your writes, your amazing heart breaks
free and dances across your pages .. it's entirely
marvelous. Your work (style and topic), reminds
me so much of another poet who used to frequent
this site. His romantic pieces were a thing to behold.
As are yours .. exquisite~
~Breezy
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Re: The Closeness Of You
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by MisfitMe on
Tuesday, 6th February 2007 @ 12:47:58 PM AEST
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"All love should be celebrated w/ such uncompromised sincerity..." she manages before swooning...ahhh...
Great Job & might I say once again how beautiful the picture of your wife shared w/ us on your page!!!
BigLoveMuchPeace
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