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Fake (and I can't stand you)

Contributed by midnight_writer on Sunday, 4th February 2007 @ 04:54:05 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



Just as the clouds hate the sun
For continually
Trying to shine through them
Push them away
And steal all the attention.

Feeding off attention
The same way your beloved vampires
Drain the life, the blood
From a weak human
Manipulative, with bad intentions.

How could I ever stand you?
You've changed so much, my darling.
Is it all just him?
Or simply lack of reality -
Gone to your head?

Bleach blonde whore
Perfect stereotype
You give us all a bad name
I don't even know you
Who you used to be.

If you weren't the way you are
You could be normal
But you never will be
You'll grow up immature and constantly broken
Fault of your own.

Making empty promises
Telling them all
A secret most would keep
You only want reactions
I think drama is like your oxygen.

You - appointed acuser of the fakes
Are the fakest of them all
Hiding behind a mask of smoke, drink, and pills
You call all them wrong
What does that make you?

I have anger, built up
From what you have done
Hide from us, disappear -
And try to come back
With only a simple apology.

Oh, Faker you've become
I don't want a part of you
Constant ups and downs
Always dramatic.
Who would want that - any of it?

Don't come crawling back,
When your whole world comes crashing down.
I don't even want to hear it.
I don't want you or any of your tears
I'm no longer a shoulder to cry on

And the day you die
I pray it rains
So that my vicious clouds
Will forever hide
Your precious sun.




Copyright © midnight_writer ... [ 2007-02-04 16:54:05]
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Re: Fake (and I can't stand you) (User Rating: 1 )
by Bleedthelove on Sunday, 4th February 2007 @ 05:31:37 PM AEST
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This poem reminds me of ALOT of people. Excellent write.


Re: Fake (and I can't stand you) (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Sunday, 4th February 2007 @ 05:40:04 PM AEST
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great expression here of anger.. I like the imagery.. I agree with bleed.. there are alot of people this way.. you have protrayed fake people very well great job

vampyress jenni


Re: Fake (and I can't stand you) (User Rating: 1 )
by Inverted on Sunday, 4th February 2007 @ 06:08:36 PM AEST
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Fantastic Write. i know exactly this emotion, ive recently just been at the blunt end of a bleach blonde pill popping drama queens attept at attention.

all i can say about this write is OUCH, perfect expression of anger and bitterness and yet sadness because you know the person could be so much more and yet they continue along this path.

good stuff.


Re: Fake (and I can't stand you) (User Rating: 1 )
by jada on Sunday, 4th February 2007 @ 10:33:11 PM AEST
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OMG!!!!!!! THIS IS HOW I FEEL ABOUT A PERSON I KNOW. iTS WEIRD HOW U SAID THE EXACT WAY I FEEL!! I LOVE THIS POEM IT IS AWESOME!!!!!!!KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!!!!!


Re: Fake (and I can't stand you) (User Rating: 1 )
by yangdantien on Monday, 5th February 2007 @ 12:29:44 PM AEST
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This piece is a grindstone for a very sharp sword unsheathed to sever what was a depth of friendship abandoned and betrayed. Very cutting for me at the time of reading as it too touches a place I know I should cut off.
Also as a kid growing up in NYC circa 60's, 70's if upon hanging out and another group of kids came along and a so-called friend left to join with them we would call them 'fakers' and 'flat-leavers' as that is what it felt like the friendship wasn't real which leaves one flat.

Provocative

Good Job

Peace
Yangdantien




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