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Capture
Contributed by
grode
on
Sunday, 4th February 2007 @ 04:44:17 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Sometimes beauty swirls around us like a shoeless dancer
But in that moment we are unable to capture
Like solving the mystery of life with just one clue
We can search the world but there shall be no answer
Sometimes sunlight finds a crevice in a darkened room
But like a lasting peace we can not capture
For when the sunlight fades we shall have dark once more
Sometimes we find a smile that makes pain disappear
But with time it fades for nothing good is everlasting
Emotion is something we can not capture
Sometimes we find moments where we could live forever,
But they will fade for immortality we can not capture
So in this darkened room I shall sit
Weaving this net as the sun is forever setting
For it was your heart I could not capture
Copyright ©
grode
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2007-02-04 16:44:17]
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Re: Capture
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by PhantomVampyress on
Sunday, 4th February 2007 @ 05:52:58 PM AEST
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I really liked this write.. Its very well expressed of lost love.. I love the ending too great job
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Re: Capture
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by Dom on
Monday, 5th February 2007 @ 12:51:14 PM AEST
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As I was reading this I found myself nodding in agreement to many of the sentiments expressed here, particularly
'Sometimes we find a smile that makes pain disappear
But with time it fades for nothing good is everlasting
Emotion is something we can not capture'
The last two lines are haunting. a beautifully expressed poem.
Dom
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