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Dusk Garden
Contributed by
NDean
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Sunday, 4th February 2007 @ 09:26:40 AM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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Nature glistens
A new prospect on the horizon
Scatters light apologetically
Over dramatically
Shards of tiresome light
Drag their heavy selves
With Astrological Precision
Star-shaped collision
Organic night fray
Drifts like feathers of a lost pillow
Fragmented Aura Chemical
Dawn Polemical
Rebirth of the soul
That’s what I heard from the dusk garden
Hypothetical Reasoning
Or a baby dream awakening
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NDean
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2007-02-04 09:26:40]
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Re: Dusk Garden
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by mysterium on
Sunday, 4th February 2007 @ 12:17:00 PM AEST
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| when reading this i get the feeling of a rebirth that will come with the morning. very abstract, good job |
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Re: Dusk Garden
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 21st March 2007 @ 10:40:46 PM AEST
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What a great title!
Made me jump right in to see what it was about.
For me...this makes me feel that out of ruin and endings...even in the dark, rebirth comes.
And it need not wait for morning... |
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Re: Dusk Garden
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by Deidra_Carmichael on
Friday, 13th November 2009 @ 01:08:28 PM AEST
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| This makes me think of someone being told about a renewal or rebirth metaphorically. |
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