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My New Life
Contributed by
a7x36
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Sunday, 4th February 2007 @ 03:33:03 AM in AEST
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And now with your skin streched so thin,
I can see straight through to your skelton.
There's bruised ribs, a shattered arm, a smashed up ankle, and a dented skull.
The car started to roll and you didn't see it coming.
It tumbled down the hill.
You didn't know you'd be alive.
I bet your life flashed before your eyes.
Roll after roll, the bruises and breaks piled up.
The guy in the back seat got knocked out.
The girl in the front screamed until she hit the window.
One last bump and you were with the others.
Left there to die in a little valley.
The blood's been strewn in all directions
and there's no one else in sight.
It got worse and worse.
You could barely move and the pain was winning.
What about the other two?
One lay dead and another dying.
There's no use in trying.
Your fait is sealed here at the bottom of this mountain.
Soon, I'll hear about it all and I'll wonder why you all had to go.
I'll be rushed off to the orphanage, too.
My new life starts with a tragic night.
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a7x36
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2007-02-04 03:33:03]
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Re: My New Life
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by yangdantien on
Monday, 5th February 2007 @ 01:16:18 PM AEST
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Gracefully the young may feel that 'fate is sealed' but it is just one track on the path of your destiny. Sad and painful in its tragedy but you remark this is your 'New Life' and that gives the reader a share of your hope.
Many Blessings. Please keep writing and posting.
Peace
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Re: My New Life
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by Butterflygirl40 on
Tuesday, 17th April 2007 @ 03:43:40 PM AEST
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tHIS WAS A VERY GOOD WRITE.
AND I DID ENJOY READING IT.
KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.
AND I WILL KEEP READING.
GOD BLESS YOU:) |
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