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Living Dream
Contributed by
MickeyPigKnuckles
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Saturday, 3rd February 2007 @ 11:35:52 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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" Living Dream "
The very first time that I saw your face
I thought my eyes had lied
god has touched the earth with your beauty
all the stars and the moon now hide
The very first time that I kissed your lips
my tears turned into streams
I trembled with a vivid realization
I kissed my Living Dream
The very first time that we made love
I could not breathe for days
my love with you is beautifully amazing
you took my breath away
I suddenly woke up tomorrow morning
alone and full of gloom
you are no longer here my life is dark
my hearts an empty beatless tomb
I search for you through all forever
please tell me your not gone
one single day without you here
is like my life too long!!!!!
Penned By James L. McHenry
Copyright © 2001 James L. McHenry
Copyright © 2001 By Mickey Pig Knuckles
Copyright © 2001 Mickey Pig Knuckles (All rights reserved)
Copyright © 2001 HeartFelt TM
Quote: Life Is Poetry In Motion, Great Poets Reflect Emotion
The Best And Most Beautiful Thing In The World Can’t Be Seen Or Touched
It Must Be Felt With Your Heart
Copyright ©
MickeyPigKnuckles
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2007-02-03 11:35:52]
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Re: Living Dream
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by Alison on
Saturday, 3rd February 2007 @ 01:58:36 PM AEST
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| wow what a very powerful write! over flowing with emotions. I really like the way you formed it and the words you use are very good; not to wordy, but enough to let the reader know how you feel! great and beautiful write. |
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Re: Living Dream
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by europeanprincess on
Saturday, 3rd February 2007 @ 05:52:13 PM AEST
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| how one emotion goes to another. how life can pass you by. how so much can be happening then BANG! this poem reflects that and i enjoyed it. thank you for sharing. |
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Re: Living Dream
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by europeanprincess on
Saturday, 3rd February 2007 @ 05:52:54 PM AEST
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| how one emotion goes to another. how life can pass you by. how so much can be happening then BANG! this poem reflects that and i enjoyed it. thank you for sharing. |
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Re: Living Dream
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by jjones12 on
Saturday, 3rd February 2007 @ 06:00:15 PM AEST
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| such a good poem....she'll/he'll be back if she/he has a good heart |
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