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No one believes we can make it!!
Contributed by
heatherslostdreams
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Saturday, 3rd February 2007 @ 03:57:54 AM in AEST
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With everything I have
I'm putting on me and you
I'm taking my life
And giving it to you
I will go to the end of the earth with you
Yet it still doesnt matter
I dont even think that I will be enough
And yet I still have hope that I will
You came into my life
And show me how strong I can be
And now Im scared I am in to deep
I have faith in you
I believe that we can make it
But baby I cant do this by myself
I need you and I need your help
Your something special
And you will always be someone
We share something
Thats goes deeper than most think
No one believes we can make it
Lets prove them all wrong
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heatherslostdreams
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2007-02-03 03:57:54]
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Re: No one believes we can make it!!
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by Oneir8dude on
Saturday, 3rd February 2007 @ 09:14:45 AM AEST
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That is the funny thing about love...
It seems the only ones that have the
right to comment are those that are in it...
The thing that will make it work for you
is those who say it won't...
Prove them wrong my freind...
I Loved your poem
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Re: No one believes we can make it!!
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by Oneir8dude on
Saturday, 3rd February 2007 @ 09:15:44 AM AEST
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That is the funny thing about love...
It seems the only ones that have the
right to comment are those that are in it...
The thing that will make it work for you
is those who say it won't...
Prove them wrong my freind...
I Loved your poem
Bill |
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Re: No one believes we can make it!!
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by MickeyPigKnuckles on
Saturday, 3rd February 2007 @ 10:31:05 AM AEST
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heatherslostdreams, I really enjoyed the awesome message of this piece. I find is so amazing that outsiders of a given relationship think or feel they have a right to voice their disapproval and openly state their judgments when its none of their business to begin with. I have seen many relationships destroyed by this very reason and its so sad that peer pressures are so destructive. I applaud you for a poem composed so beautifully and with such a wonderful message. Very good job.
Mickey Pig Knuckles :) |
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Re: No one believes we can make it!!
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by Alison on
Saturday, 3rd February 2007 @ 02:03:47 PM AEST
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| keep going! fight for the one you love, but its true that the other must fight for you too! dont let what people say bring you down! beautiful write. great job! |
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Re: No one believes we can make it!!
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by PhantomVampyress on
Sunday, 4th February 2007 @ 06:00:17 PM AEST
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this is a very well expressed write.. don't let others get involved in your relationship.. if it is meant to be it will work out no matter what.. ask for Gods blessing and strength. however always remember a relationship takes 2 people.. this is a very good write.. I enjoyed it
thanks for sharing
vampyress Jenni |
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