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One Step...
Contributed by
EddieDean
on
Friday, 2nd February 2007 @ 04:45:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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One more Step,
And it's all Over.
Just one Step,
And Im Gone.
I look down the Cliff,
Down onto the Ocean Below,
I would Die,
And no one would Know.
A tear falls from my Eye,
And I watch it Fall.
This is the Way,
That Im going to Die.
One More Step,
And its all Over,
One More Step,
And Im Gone.
I lift my Foot,
And begin to go Ahead.
I fall from the Cliff,
I close my Eyes,
And wait for my End.
Just One More Step,
And I End My Life.
Copyright ©
EddieDean
... [
2007-02-02 16:45:01]
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Re: One Step...
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by SaintzAndSinnerz on
Friday, 2nd February 2007 @ 05:41:53 PM AEST
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| Everyone has dark thoughts once in a while, just as long as you dont follow through with those thoughts. Cheer up!! |
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Re: One Step...
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by SilverMercury on
Friday, 2nd February 2007 @ 06:26:11 PM AEST
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| This is so beautiful! Don't leave though...People would miss your poetry. :) |
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Re: One Step...
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by Lilbabe on
Friday, 2nd February 2007 @ 10:10:38 PM AEST
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Nice. I like it.
One step is all it takes, isn't it?
Well, hang in there! |
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Re: One Step...
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by Jen_unknown_to_myself on
Saturday, 3rd February 2007 @ 10:02:53 PM AEST
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I'm sorry to hear that you are going through another rough patch. Just remember those that love you, remember them every night before you fall asleep and every morning after you wake up. Remembering those who love you will help be an inspiration to keep you going. Rough times come and when they go you know there's another rough time right after the last. It's the good times in between those rough ones that should keep you going. I've learned that. I know what your going through rough times suck but life is nothing to think about giving up.
I hope you find peace in yourself soon.
By the way this was a great poem. It had much passion in it. Keep up the good work.
Unknown to myself,
Jen |
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